It's nice that you take the time and dedication to do all of that stuff in a short amount of time and record all of your progress. Haha I couldn't dream of doing so much video game stuff in a short time
I do like the way you were very straightforward about how everything happened in the sequence of events. It's good that you're making such great improvements on the town already, but I think it would have been a bit more interesting if you had started from scratch as if you were starting the game for the first time. But you know, you do you.
I think it'll be nice to see the town when it is completed! I saw the picture of the small tulip garden, and that piqued my interest. I really like flowers in towns, hence the reason why my town is about 85% flowers. Here's hoping you have more flowers to come and liven up the place
That is all for now. Tune in next time to hear more critique from xSuperMario64x herself!
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