An idea for a novel i had Whilst watching '28 weeks later'

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Today i watched the Zombie movie '28 Weeks Later', well i say 'Watch', more like Shout at the TV going 'WTF YOU DOING?! *censored.1.1*!!!!' but thats another story...

Anyhow i thought about making my own, again this is just an idea which me and a friend will be writing and this is literally somit i wrote on MSN in 20minutes ish. So its in note form.
All i want is C+C, but dont go OTT ok?

Its set like nowish (so its in 2010/2011 but the break out happened like 2009ish)
And basically its like this. The break out started in 2009 when the Oxford Uni Labs (animal testing block) were making a 'virus' to try and create a soldier which couldnt feel fear and would basically feel no emotion for a small period of time during a battle
When they injected a monkey it broke out and attacked several scientists, infecting them with the virus
(The Virus is spread via Salvia and Blood, contact only)
But the Virus is almost slow acting, it takes approx. 1hour to infect, for the first 30minutes there are no symptoms. Then the subject will start coughing blood, eventually the skin tone darkens turning grey and the eyes become bloodshot and the eye colour turns black
So essentially the scientists are sent to a hospital after the coughing blood and end up infecting the JR hospitals (inculding the Child ward)
And it then turns world wide. Essentially wiping out Japan, Hawaii, China and iceland
Also several American states were wiped out, just thinking which ones...
And 78% of the worlds population becomes infected and 45% of it is basically dead
And the story follows me 8D. Who basically managed to escape Oxford with his family (being the only survivors from there) and he took up running the operation as he had faced quite a few
Zombies i mean lol
But theres like, 3 types of Zombie. 'Zombie' (essentailly your classic slow moving guys). 'Runners' (theese are Zombies, but they can run longer than most humans and faster, plus they have a larger IQ than a Zombie) and 'Mutated' (essentially Zombies which have certain Mutations, E.G. larger arm muscles).
And the Virus can ONLY infect Humans + Monkeys (toying with Dogs but I might not since this is kinda an old idea.)
But it starts like in the present, then we get the flashback of what happened, then back to the present and then it goes on from there
 
Nevermore said:
Seems kinda cliche, but I like apocalyptic stories, I was actually writing my own in my head last week.
Well to keep it from being 'Clich
 
Sanji said:
Nevermore said:
Sanji said:
Nevermore said:
Sanji said:
Quoting limited to 5 levels deep
I can count about 2 cliche things in your non-cliche list.

1. Whole world becomes infested (See I am Legend)
2. Two Species can acquire it (See I am Legend)

kthxbai4now
I do believe in 'I Am Legend' it only shows America. In this it'll show The whole world in several little bits and will move from country to country. Also it only infects that one city, if you watch they contain it within that one city.
Also It only Shows it infecting 2 speicies (dogs+Humans) where as this will have proof it can only infect apes+humans (as dogs are bitten and they just die)

I like your arguement but its kinda weak. Mainly since 'I Am Legend' was one of the worst Zombie moves i've ever watched, not just because of the low quality of the graphics.
He broadcasts to the world because he is one of the last humans.
Wrong.
He Broadcasts to the CITY.Because he BELIEVES he is the last human, Didnt you see the ending?!
Watch it again then come back kk?
Haven't watched it since it came out, so I might be a little rusty, but if you go onto the special features you can watch all of those story things and they are from all around the world.
 
Nevermore said:
Sanji said:
Nevermore said:
Sanji said:
Nevermore said:
Quoting limited to 5 levels deep
I do believe in 'I Am Legend' it only shows America. In this it'll show The whole world in several little bits and will move from country to country. Also it only infects that one city, if you watch they contain it within that one city.
Also It only Shows it infecting 2 speicies (dogs+Humans) where as this will have proof it can only infect apes+humans (as dogs are bitten and they just die)

I like your arguement but its kinda weak. Mainly since 'I Am Legend' was one of the worst Zombie moves i've ever watched, not just because of the low quality of the graphics.
He broadcasts to the world because he is one of the last humans.
Wrong.
He Broadcasts to the CITY.Because he BELIEVES he is the last human, Didnt you see the ending?!
Watch it again then come back kk?
Haven't watched it since it came out, so I might be a little rusty, but if you go onto the special features you can watch all of those story things and they are from all around the world.
Well i didnt watch the Special Features so you COULD be right, we dont have it here since we gave it away since we didnt like it. Its one of Will's Worst movies IMHO.

But Did you watch 28 Weeks later and do what i did? Constantly shout at the tv since its like 'WTF?!' Heres a small list of things which were just plainly wrong.

1. How'd the Guy get into where the woman was without an armed guard? Also HOW'D HE KNOW THE CODE TO GET IN+OUT THE DOOR?!
2. Why the *censored.3.0* did the Soldier run up to the Guy? Even though hes just munched the hell out of his comrades neck? Why didnt he just shoot?!
3. WHY THE *censored.3.0* DID THEY PUT ALL THE CIVILIANS IN THE CELLAR LIKE SARDINES?! WITHOUT A GUARD FFS!!!!
4. Why wasnt there MORE of a defense? Like Some Tanks or the odd Apache Helecopter outside the building? One minute there are HUNDREDS of theese things then there are NONE.
5. Why the *censored.3.0* was the underground not blocked off or defended? SURELY this would be one of the first things you'd defend if (apprently) it lead to france and Europe!!!!


Lol i was like 'Failll'
 
Sanji said:
Nevermore said:
Sanji said:
Nevermore said:
Sanji said:
Quoting limited to 5 levels deep
He broadcasts to the world because he is one of the last humans.
Wrong.
He Broadcasts to the CITY.Because he BELIEVES he is the last human, Didnt you see the ending?!
Watch it again then come back kk?
Haven't watched it since it came out, so I might be a little rusty, but if you go onto the special features you can watch all of those story things and they are from all around the world.
Well i didnt watch the Special Features so you COULD be right, we dont have it here since we gave it away since we didnt like it. Its one of Will's Worst movies IMHO.

But Did you watch 28 Weeks later and do what i did? Constantly shout at the tv since its like 'WTF?!' Heres a small list of things which were just plainly wrong.

1. How'd the Guy get into where the woman was without an armed guard? Also HOW'D HE KNOW THE CODE TO GET IN+OUT THE DOOR?!
2. Why the *censored.3.0* did the Soldier run up to the Guy? Even though hes just munched the hell out of his comrades neck? Why didnt he just shoot?!
3. WHY THE *censored.3.0* DID THEY PUT ALL THE CIVILIANS IN THE CELLAR LIKE SARDINES?! WITHOUT A GUARD FFS!!!!
4. Why wasnt there MORE of a defense? Like Some Tanks or the odd Apache Helecopter outside the building? One minute there are HUNDREDS of theese things then there are NONE.
5. Why the *censored.3.0* was the underground not blocked off or defended? SURELY this would be one of the first things you'd defend if (apprently) it lead to france and Europe!!!!


Lol i was like 'Failll'
Didn't read the part about 28 Weeks later due to the fact I don't want to ruin it.

They were these weird animated comic book things on the DVD, I thought it was pretty good.

Except for Jeff, if you are dumb enough to walk into your own trap then you should be slapped.
 
Nevermore said:
Sanji said:
Nevermore said:
Sanji said:
Nevermore said:
Quoting limited to 5 levels deep
Wrong.
He Broadcasts to the CITY.Because he BELIEVES he is the last human, Didnt you see the ending?!
Watch it again then come back kk?
Haven't watched it since it came out, so I might be a little rusty, but if you go onto the special features you can watch all of those story things and they are from all around the world.
Well i didnt watch the Special Features so you COULD be right, we dont have it here since we gave it away since we didnt like it. Its one of Will's Worst movies IMHO.

But Did you watch 28 Weeks later and do what i did? Constantly shout at the tv since its like 'WTF?!' Heres a small list of things which were just plainly wrong.

1. How'd the Guy get into where the woman was without an armed guard? Also HOW'D HE KNOW THE CODE TO GET IN+OUT THE DOOR?!
2. Why the *censored.3.0* did the Soldier run up to the Guy? Even though hes just munched the hell out of his comrades neck? Why didnt he just shoot?!
3. WHY THE *censored.3.0* DID THEY PUT ALL THE CIVILIANS IN THE CELLAR LIKE SARDINES?! WITHOUT A GUARD FFS!!!!
4. Why wasnt there MORE of a defense? Like Some Tanks or the odd Apache Helecopter outside the building? One minute there are HUNDREDS of theese things then there are NONE.
5. Why the *censored.3.0* was the underground not blocked off or defended? SURELY this would be one of the first things you'd defend if (apprently) it lead to france and Europe!!!!


Lol i was like 'Failll'
Didn't read the part about 28 Weeks later due to the fact I don't want to ruin it.

They were these weird animated comic book things on the DVD, I thought it was pretty good.

Except for Jeff, if you are dumb enough to walk into your own trap then you should be slapped.
Watch the Movie ASAP. You'll see what i mean.
Since is just littered with holes, and it almost seems to make out the American army cant handle a situation in anyway,shape or form. I'm usually the first to jump on the 'Americans are dumb' bandwagon but even i can say 'The american CANT be that stupid.'
I might post this in a seperate thread to see if anyone can explain this to me.
 
Read I Am Legend and then come back and tell me that what you're writing is not clich
 
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