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Hello~
I played around for a bit and was wondering how much my art would be worth.
Boop, shading isn't as visible as i thought it would be. o-x

I'd also love any tutorials or be pointed out some things to improve on.
I'm not 100% satisfied with how i draw hair atm as well as the shading, so it would be great if anyone had advice for me.

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Hello! I think your style is gorgeous, but since you're asking for critique, heres my advice!

Critique: I love the dramatic, gorgeous eyes, but they seem a bit too close to each other and a bit too cropped downwards. The nose is slightly crooked and the shoulders a bit too low and wide.

Advice: Use different strokes and different pencils for different parts of your drawing. Use different sizes of lines, becouse smaller lines would look gorgeous in the inside of the of the character, and wide ones in the outsides of the character. I suggest you log into pinterest and follow the following person: https://www.pinterest.com/characterdesigh/ they have everything you need in art, in various styles and programs.

For price, i'd say 20tbt, but if you follow the tips and learn from critique, i think your art could be an easy 50-100 tbt!

I hope this works! Sorry if the critique was a bit harsh.
 
Your art style is really nice, I love it! My only critique is that with the eyes so close together, it makes the art look a bit strange. Maybe move them down and apart a bit. I'd say around 100-150 tbt right now.
 
Thanks everyone for posting!


Hello! I think your style is gorgeous, but since you're asking for critique, heres my advice!

Critique: I love the dramatic, gorgeous eyes, but they seem a bit too close to each other and a bit too cropped downwards. The nose is slightly crooked and the shoulders a bit too low and wide.

Advice: Use different strokes and different pencils for different parts of your drawing. Use different sizes of lines, becouse smaller lines would look gorgeous in the inside of the of the character, and wide ones in the outsides of the character. I suggest you log into pinterest and follow the following person: https://www.pinterest.com/characterdesigh/ they have everything you need in art, in various styles and programs.

For price, i'd say 20tbt, but if you follow the tips and learn from critique, i think your art could be an easy 50-100 tbt!

I hope this works! Sorry if the critique was a bit harsh.


It's not harsh, no worries. ^^ I know that my art is not that great, so ways to improve are awesome.
Thank you so much for the advice and link. ; u ;

Edit; I love that page so much ahhh. It's really helpful. ;;
 
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Thanks everyone for posting!





It's not harsh, no worries. ^^ I know that my art is not that great, so ways to improve are awesome.
Thank you so much for the advice and link. ; u ;

Edit; I love that page so much ahhh. It's really helpful. ;;

Aa im so glad i could help! When you do requests pleace let me know!
 
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