Any advice?

[DrJawsh]

I recently drew my toon, (if you know what toontown is then ya know what I mean but if you dont its basically an animal) Any advice? Here is the pic!

 

[Knopekin]

Nice job! I like the reflection going on in his (?) glasses. I'm not great at critique, but I think a white oval would maybe suit the picture better than the freedrawn shape Ubelix is in at the moment; the font you've chosen for his name is quite geometric, and a proper shape might match it a little better? Keep it up, though, and post more stuff!

 

[DrJawsh]

Thank you so much!!! I feel amazing when I get good reviews, thanks for the critique!

 

[timecapsule]

It's nice, I like how cartoony it is. As Knopekin said I recommend using a straight oval to surround the character. The shading on the glasses is very good! Definitely keep on drawing. I can tell already your drawings will get really really good if you keep practicing.

 

[tae]

i like the style a lot.
are you a black cat? or are you on tti and using the color hex?

i play both ttr and tti. (although i literally just made my tti toon a few days ago and haven't played much)

 

[DrJawsh]

Yeah I play TTI and TTR Ubelix is in TTI and there is toons in the playground that turn you black!

 

[tae]

Yeah I play TTI and TTR Ubelix is in TTI and there is toons in the playground that turn you black!

yeah there's yin anf yang, and they make black cats and white bears. :')
my toon's name yixing on both games.
but my ttr toon is in the 100+ range, and my tti toon is still in ttc.

 

[DrJawsh]

nice! im drawing something and ill make a new post with it asap!!