Best short story ever

[Propaganda Man]

Average John

John had an average body. John had an average life. John had an average voice. John had an average car. John had an average house. John was an average man. John didn

 

[Gabby]

How dramatic>


But it was good.

 

[SL92]

Best. Story. Ever.


I like how you put the emphasis on "average" at the very start. Catches the readers attention.

 

[Propaganda Man]

Thx

 

[Grawr]

Very good! How long have you been writing? (If you did write this...I'm guessing you did, but it never said so in your post...)