Collective Punishment Essay

[Bacon Boy]

Just finished the rough draft, C&C.

The Collective Menace

Imagine yourself as a student, just minding your own business in school, when, out of the blue, someone starts acting up. The teacher, frustrated by this outburst, decides to punish the student, and the entire class as well. Does this sound unfair? If it does, you are correct. This form of punishment, called

 

[//RUN.exe]

look up synonyms for "repercussion"

seriously I read it like 7 times in two sentences.

other than that it seems fine.

 

[Bacon Boy]

look up synonyms for "repercussion"

seriously I read it like 7 times in two sentences.

other than that it seems fine.

Thanks. Took me three hours. @_@

 

[Pear]

Nice. I agree. Why should I have 10 extra math problems because the kids in the back row are screwing around? :/

As for CC, what run.exe said.

 

[Bacon Boy]

Nice. I agree. Why should I have 10 extra math problems because the kids in the back row are screwing around? :/

As for CC, what run.exe said.

I'm gonna edit it now.

EDIT: I'm editing the whole thing right now for other mistakes. So I'll post the edited version in a bit.

 

[Jeremy]

"Society's needs come before the individual's needs." - Adolf Hitler

vs.

"The main characteristic of collectivism is that it does not take notice of the individual

 

[Bacon Boy]

"Society's needs come before the individual's needs." - Adolf Hitler

vs.

"The main characteristic of collectivism is that it does not take notice of the individual

 

[Ciaran]

I think if you're writing an essay like that oyu shouldn't have put the bit about God in it, it leaves an obvious hole for debate in the essay.

 

[Bacon Boy]

I think if you're writing an essay like that oyu shouldn't have put the bit about God in it, it leaves an obvious hole for debate in the essay.

I go to a Christian School...

 

[Ciaran]

I think if you're writing an essay like that oyu shouldn't have put the bit about God in it, it leaves an obvious hole for debate in the essay.

I go to a Christian School...

So do I, but that's still a hole in what was an otherwise solid arguement.

 

[Bacon Boy]

I think if you're writing an essay like that oyu shouldn't have put the bit about God in it, it leaves an obvious hole for debate in the essay.

I go to a Christian School...

So do I, but that's still a hole in what was an otherwise solid arguement.

This argument is against Christians. It's even against the school board. If I apply morals and ethics into it, it'll reinforce my argument.

 

[Jeremy]

"Society's needs come before the individual's needs." - Adolf Hitler

vs.

"The main characteristic of collectivism is that it does not take notice of the individual

 

[Bacon Boy]

"Society's needs come before the individual's needs." - Adolf Hitler

vs.

"The main characteristic of collectivism is that it does not take notice of the individual