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starcults

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Kaysar is a 6 foot tall Deva, or an angel/heavenly figure in Buddhism, which is a type of fairy. His blood type is AB, and he has creamy beige skin, with a pentacle marking behind his right ear, near the nape of his neck. His somatotype is mesomorph, and he gets around by walking/running, since he can't fly.
His hair color is chocolate copper and 6 inches long, and his hair style is 'Fade'.
His eye color is chilly blue, almost silver, and he has down turned eyes beneath flat, thick eyebrows.
He has a snub shaped nose covered in dark brown/almost black freckles, just like the rest of his face.
He has a rectangle shaped face.
He has a hypertrophic burn scar that goes from just beneath his collarbone to his mid-arm.
He belongs in my story, Faerie Bell, and here's a short summary (for fear my idea might get stolen);
Being immortal is hard. So in order to forget all their memories, a fairy has the choice to wipe their brain entirely, and all their memories are stored in a little plant. If they want to recover their memories, they have to drink a tea made from the plant. The whole story is about Kaysar finding out who he is, but as he finds out more about his past, the more he wishes remembering wasn't an option.​
 
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