Critique a quick sketch I did :3

[axo]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f341/chees4mees/image2_zpsnasy233m.jpg

I was wondering what you guys thought of some of my art and no I do not have an actual scanner so I took a pic on my phone.

I am getting a scanner soon so I was wondering if anyone would actually pay for something like this.

Thanks~

 

[axo]

Bump~ Please leave very harsh critiques, I need it lol

 

[Bostostar]

All I could say is clean up the lines, either than that it looks great

 

[tomothy]

the head is a bit lopsided and the arms are in an uncomfortable position but other than that it looks p good!

 

[axo]

Omfg thank you. I just wanted confirmation that the arms did actually look like they were broken. I can close this thread now, thanks xD

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Oh never mind I can't close it ok xD