critique and maybe some freebs if you want

[milkyi]

i just need some critique for my art, and maybe i'll do a couple freebs. i'm not that great at drawing males so sorry. i don't always shade my drawings, but i'll shade the freebs.

Spoiler: Examples

 

[Locket]

-Shading Breasts need shading underneath. And your top one needs her crack to be shaded (sorry, I don't know what to call it XD)
-Anatomy This just needs improvment.
-Eyes They need more pupil and shine.
-Hair Should have more wind affect to it. Not just straight down and tiny out things
-Lines They are shaky. Try to improve.

Spoiler: Wanna try my OC, Joy, though? Try to apply what I just said!

 

[Nightmares]

(My art is pretty shet so I don't know if I should give you advice xD)

To me, the hair looks a bit stiff: In the first pic, the hair looks quite unnatural - try using reference when drawing, maybe? Also, I think the anatomy is a liiiiitle bit off. so bad at giving advice sorry

Looks awesome doe ^.^ I'll have to grab my refs xD

EDIT: http://www.belltreeforums.com/album.php?u=89438 <<< Either one, you can choose. Thanks so much! <3

 

[EtchaSketch]

Anatomy is off, work on hair and color blending. Clothing looks unnatural,
Butthe last one is cute

uvu