critique + freeb headshots (pu: p o c k y)

[jiny]

hi i want critique on my headshots

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i don't want harsh critique please because sometimes my feelings get hurt

i would also like to do some freeb headshots if they're good enough. just leave me a ref of your oc/mayor and ill do it if i am able to.

i also want some sort of pricing i guess

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P e o n y​

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P o c k y​

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[piske]

Ahhh, that is sooo adorable!!! xD you could practice with the adopt in my sig if you want!!!

 

[jiny]

Ahhh, that is sooo adorable!!! xD you could practice with the adopt in my sig if you want!!!

omg you really think so

okay ill try lol

 

[milkyi]

I have one thing to say for critique:

Work on symmetry.

Consider my oc? c: [x]

 

[jiny]

I have one thing to say for critique:

Work on symmetry.

Consider my oc? c: [x]

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im working on p e o n y's right now so ill make sure to do yours later tonight or tomorrow c:

 

[timecapsule]

ADORABLE.
As far as critique, I would say maybe work on adding more shading :]

if you could maybe do my mayor, Emma I'd probably love you forever (but not in a creepy way lol)

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View attachment 157977 by beary
View attachment 157978 by xcherryskyx

Thank you <3

 

[jiny]

ADORABLE.
As far as critique, I would say maybe work on adding more shading :]

if you could maybe do my mayor, Emma I'd probably love you forever (but not in a creepy way lol)

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View attachment 157977 by beary
View attachment 157978 by xcherryskyx

Thank you <3

ahhh ty

 

[timecapsule]

ahhh ty

yes yayay! super excited X)

 

[jiny]

yes yayay! super excited X)

im glad x3

ughhh this is why i can't do boys
he looks like a girl now

 

[piske]

omg you really think so

okay ill try lol

Yes! I mean, I think it is a super cute drawing!!! :> It's simple but adorable, which is a style that I like!

 

[jiny]

Yes! I mean, I think it is a super cute drawing!!! :> It's simple but adorable, which is a style that I like!

yay im glad you like it :>
im almost done with yours, i just need to color the skin

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p e o n y

well here it is :/ He is a boy :<

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[piske]

yay im glad you like it :>
im almost done with yours, i just need to color the skin

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p e o n y

well here it is :/ He is a boy :<

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AHHH NOOO he is so cute!!! xD Aww thank you so much, I <3 him!!! He is def more feminine!!! xD

 

[jiny]

AHHH NOOO he is so cute!!! xD Aww thank you so much, I <3 him!!! He is def more feminine!!! xD

aww thank you :>

 

[piske]

aww thank you :>

Heh, he's in my sig if that's ok :>

 

[jiny]

Heh, he's in my sig if that's ok :>

aha that's fine c:

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P o c k y

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i hope you like it c:
now on to Jellonoes! when i finish hers, i won't be doing this first come first serve anymore. i will do it in any order as i please.

 

[milkyi]

aha that's fine c:

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P o c k y

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i hope you like it c:
now on to Jellonoes! when i finish hers, i won't be doing this first come first serve anymore. i will do it in any order as i please.

Aahh tysm! I love it!

 

[Locket]

Well,
「ｓぽいｌｒ」
It would help if I was in english keyboard...

Spoiler: Critique

First of all, work in layers
Shading
Eye design (with color)
Lines are shaky
Anatomy of la heads is off
Ears need improvement.
The eye of the balls needs improvment with size