CRITIQUE MY ARTS

[pickle inkii.]

So I need a bit of help here.
I'm aiming to make a shop and I wanted to know if this art could be worth anything, so I'd like critique and suggestions for pricing! I'll mainly be making headshots.

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I'll also be offering freebies so I could practice.
Thanks!

 

[timecapsule]

It's really cute. but I'd say for it to be even better, you should clean up the colors outside of the lines.
Worth atleast 15-30 TBT. Keep practicing. I really would like to see more from you.

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[teto]

These are cute! If you're just gonna be doing headshots and nothing else then I think a solid price for these is somewhere between 10-40tbt? I love the art style hee, you should keep practicing.
Of course if you're planning on doing more than a headshot it should probably be more, but the price for that is really up to your best judgement.
Maybe you could do a headshot of the lovely lady in my avatar? feel free to skip past her if you don't like the design or it's too hard or something!

 

[Nightmares]

10TBT sounds good to me ^.^

 

[pickle inkii.]

Thanks!
As suggested, I cleaned her up a bit. This is a bit more like it~

God, this is big.

 

[teto]

Thanks!
As suggested, I cleaned her up a bit. This is a bit more like it~

God, this is big.

she looks even cuter!

 

[strawberrywine]

I suggest you make the lineart and shading much smoother, other than that's it's good

 

[PeeBraiin]

Very cute! Please vm/pm me. I'm intersted in buying a few of these ^^

 

[pickle inkii.]

Freebs are now closed, I recently opened a shop.
I would like some tips on how to improve, so bumpity bump.

 

[timecapsule]

Maybe start making the lines a darker color of the coloring inside? The black lines are really thick and distracting. Or you could go with a less dark black-ish color, or brown.

 

[bug2buga]

id suggest making the image larger if you want it more detailed

 

[Mercedes]

http://www.belltreeforums.com/showt...5-PAYING-UP-TOO-600-TBT&p=6110138#post6110138
Maybe making the line around her head thinner? C: besides that she's adorable thanks for offering freebies

 

[scotch]

I think you should have more sharpness and contrast.