Critique two new traditional art pieces ^^
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That Zephyr Guy
crouton.net
There's not too much to critique from my point of view (Aside from the infused Asriel pic) as your drawings are very heavily stylized.
I can't help but notice however that your art style changes a fair bit from Asriel to Chara. I'm not really saying you may have not drawn these entirely, but in the off chance that you did I don't really recommend selling them. If you did however, then I'm totally sorry and feel free to sell some art.
I can't help but notice however that your art style changes a fair bit from Asriel to Chara. I'm not really saying you may have not drawn these entirely, but in the off chance that you did I don't really recommend selling them. If you did however, then I'm totally sorry and feel free to sell some art.
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LethalLulu
Hi, buy, bye
Is this another piece you are looking for critique on?
No, this isn't mine, it's just an image I used for reference but I posted on the wrong thread x3
On the second piece, my friend helped me a bit with the body of (regular)Asriel, Im not sure if she got the idea from a piece of fanart she saw but unless the work is done 100% by me I won't sell it.
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Candi Calculus
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I love the different line thicknesses on the Chara picture! Varying how thick your lines are throughout a picture is a great way to add some oomph to your drawing.
Thanks! Some of the line variation was an accident, but mostly I stuck to thick lines on the head and face and thinner lines on the body and details. Sometimes my hand wasn't steady and went off the lines so I filled in with black
Candi Calculus
Senior Member
Ha ha ha! That's pretty funny. Many of the "mistakes" I made in a drawing turn into "Oh, I totally meant for that to look like that..."
