Critique!

[milkyi]

The quality isn't that great, so sorry if it's kinda hard to make out. Would someone like to critique this drawing I made?

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[pickle inkii.]

I find it great! It would be much better if it was digitalized or colored in or something like that, but it's overall nice.

 

[That Zephyr Guy]

It looks pretty nice. My one qualm is that there is a lot of empty space in the picture. Perhaps you could either add more detail in the future, or if that's intentional, show more of the character in the picture?

 

[milkyi]

It looks pretty nice. My one qualm is that there is a lot of empty space in the picture. Perhaps you could either add more detail in the future, or if that's intentional, show more of the character in the picture?

It kinda was just a rough draft, but I'll make note of that!

 

[milkyi]

Bump

 

[cIementine]

I think it's a really nice style, like said above, when developing make sure to colour in and fill the space. maybe add some details to the hair like shading, make it more of a complex shape? idk