critiques??? :o

[AmaiiTenshii]

i reeeeeeeeeally need some of them.

i pretty much just had a hoard of people tell me that my art is **** without any explanation, on deviantart of all places, so i'd like to see what people think on a website that's at the very least less notorious for having annoying users.

please be honest, but specific. it annoys me to hell and back when someone tells me that something is wrong, but doesnt say what that "something" is and how to fix it. i'm not a mind reader ;<; so if something is wrong, tell me what the problem is and how to possibly do something about it.

also i'm sorry to all the people who ordered from my art shop and didnt get their stuff/didnt pay/etc, i've been sososososo busy with school lately that i kinda abandoned it, drawing, and tbt in general because i havent had a lot of free time ;;.

Spoiler: trash

 

[EtchaSketch]

I love your art, really. But, the thing I noticed, specifically in the first and last pics, that one of the eye comes off of the face. This is a no-no, it makes the proportions seem off. Other than that, I adore your art<33 I wish I had your style, and that second to last piece is beautiful

 

[AmaiiTenshii]

I love your art, really. But, the thing I noticed, specifically in the first and last pics, that one of the eye comes off of the face. This is a no-no, it makes the proportions seem off. Other than that, I adore your art<33 I wish I had your style, and that second to last piece is beautiful

thank you very much! the first pic was after not drawing for 2-ish months due to the school predicament, and the last one is really old since i put these in order from newer to older, so maybe that's why? i tend to draw bigass eyes most of the time and then hide it via hair or whatever lol but usually i'm better at making it seem less weird when it comes to eyeballs sliding off of faces. thank you again! >//<

 

[Pokemanz]

Words cannot describe how beautiful your art is. You just have this style that I love so much. ;A;

The character in the first and second pics reminds me of my OC Sarah haha. Amazing stuff!

 

[AmaiiTenshii]

Words cannot describe how beautiful your art is. You just have this style that I love so much. ;A;

The character in the first and second pics reminds me of my OC Sarah haha. Amazing stuff!

>///////< thank you so much!!! and lol the character in those pics is actually me /)////(\ or at least i tried to draw myself, but i think its pretty accurate

 

[Llust]

your style is really unique & eye catching - its by far one of the best drawing styles ive seen in awhile. you already got all the basics down so theres nothing specifically that you need to focus on, just practice whenever you can and you'll improve on everything all together over time c:

 

[boujee]

Probably because all your coloring looks shiny as ever
I wouldn't say your art looks like sht but it also doesn't look appealing cause well, that coloring.
The coloring kinda looks like one of those people who draws their own sonics oc's and they have such emo/scene looking hair and you're like "oh"
Then after awhile of looking, especially the last ones begin to look weird(are they old)? The first two look new and more appealing while the others just look super shiny but they aren't sht. Probably not their cup of tea but it's not like what the others offer on this site.

 

[Beardo]

Oh wow, I love your style. Nice to see some nice and curvy girls instead of the stereotypical skinny anime chicks

 

[AmaiiTenshii]

Probably because all your coloring looks shiny as ever
I wouldn't say your art looks like sht but it also doesn't look appealing cause well, that coloring.
The coloring kinda looks like one of those people who draws their own sonics oc's and they have such emo/scene looking hair and you're like "oh"
Then after awhile of looking, especially the last ones begin to look weird(are they old)? The first two look new and more appealing while the others just look super shiny but they aren't sht. Probably not their cup of tea but it's not like what the others offer on this site.

Yeah, they're all sorta in order from newest to oldest. So the last ones are indeed at least 3/4 months old (probably older) by now.


The first three are all from this month (so kinda not in order but still) but the first one is after not drawing for a while due to school soo.. The colouring and everything else on there is ****ed because of that.