Critize this

[boujee]

So my tablet pen broke so that makes more room for practicing and alternating my style

I did this doodle in my binder of my gemsona:

I never worked with long wild hair(other than Zuji) but she's fun to work with and I really don't mind how odd she come out.

But tips?

 

[EtchaSketch]

I love the face and the pose tbh
The hair could just be a little more flowy

 

[riummi]

Can I draw ur gemsona xD I'm so obsessed with drawing em.

I think the proportions could use some work, either the head is a tad too big or her body is too small. Elbows seem a bit too pointy. Not sure how in depth to criticize this but it seems pretty good anyways xD

 

[boujee]

No it's fine lol
This is the first time I did a full body
In class we're practicing gestures so this was the first actually doing such but thank you two so far

And go for it orz
Which one though?

 

[spurrinkle]

oo this is really cute!
but of course, like all art, there are some flaws


It looks as if shes holding her hair up wit her hands.
Try to make that more known?
show her fingers coming out of her hair or show bulges from her hair pressing against it

the elbow on the left of the screen is a little too pointy, but it's a minor mistake, nothing really.

her chest to her hips literally look so perfect, i love how you drew her breast <3
( oops sounded creepy sORRY )

other then that, its amazing??
Maybe try making the legs look less stiff and you're good ^-^​

 

[boujee]

Aha thank you so much
I'll be sure to work on these
And thank you again! I love drawing the upper and lower body(the bean).

She had her hands behind her head, now that I look at it it seems like she's putting her hair up orz but I'll work on it!
Thank you guys for the critizism.

I'll practice more with flow and less stiff and structures

 

[riummi]

Show me all yo gemsonas plzz

 

[boujee]

Spoiler: reveals

There's more but these three are saved on my phone atm u vu

 

[riummi]

damn they look good. Ah the especially pink star one is especially cute

 

[boujee]

Aha thank you

And does anyone know any tutorials for more flowy hair?

 

[EtchaSketch]

http://darlingmionette.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-How-To-Draw-Hair-1-173735335

 

[boujee]

Thank you sweetums

 

[TinyCentaur]

This is really nice. I don't have much else to say other than what has been said, the head does look a little big. To me, the hair doesn't look quite right, it looks a little stiff. Try adding more lines to the hair, and extending some of the locks of the hair too if that makes sense.

But this is an adorable Gemsona omg ;u;

 

[boujee]

Oooh thank you