Deer's art

[deerui]

Welcome to Deer's art dump


Hi there, I'm Deerui, though you may call me deer/yui
yes, I have one already, but it's gross and unorganized Dx
here will be where i post WIP sketches, lineart, finished art, etc.
this place is welcome for critiques!
I'd actually prefer it, but please no mean comments, I know
my art isn't great, i need you to tell me what im
doing wrong, don't just say i suck!

if redlines are posted, please post them in a spoiler with [/B] tags or without a spoiler in [B][url][/B] tags[/I]










[U]examples[/U]


[url=http://i1164.photobucket.com/albums/q570/alpacahs/aime/yuiteRA_zpsvapnnqyq.png] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Zi9xmLY.png[/url]


click image to see complete drawing
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[deerui]

Spoiler: lineart wip

 

[deerui]

Spoiler: finished

 

[deerui]

Boops

 

[deerui]

Spoiler: IMPROVEMENT

3/01/15

3/19/15


kinda upset tbh, the eyes were REALLY cute but i forgot to save after i finished the eyes so i redid them and they're bleh

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[roroselle]

Hey you're improving with the hair good job

 

[g u m m i]

Just askin', wanna be art partners? I'm currently new to digtal art, had my tablet for...2-3 months? I'm 12 btw :3 You can check out my art on my Random Doodles thread, I really like your style!!!

 

[deerui]

Hey you're improving with the hair good job

wah, thanks <3​

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Just askin', wanna be art partners? I'm currently new to digtal art, had my tablet for...2-3 months? I'm 12 btw :3 You can check out my art on my Random Doodles thread, I really like your style!!!

the same age cries
tbh i dont know what a drawing buddy is ; v ;;

 

[g u m m i]

Oh, It's not really a term just like we can be seperate artists and do collabs with eachother and..stuff hahah -u-; what tablet do you use? Currently working with Intous pro and Mac Paint I hate paint >:~|

 

[deerui]

Oh, It's not really a term just like we can be seperate artists and do collabs with eachother and..stuff hahah -u-; what tablet do you use? Currently working with Intous pro and Mac Paint I hate paint >:~|

Wacom intuos and firealpaca, occasionally using paint tool sai

 

[g u m m i]

Ah, I was going to download Fire Alpaca but apparently it's not verified for Mac, so, I don't know why I even try any more, haha.

 

[deerui]

Ah, I was going to download Fire Alpaca but apparently it's not verified for Mac, so, I don't know why I even try any more, haha.

uh yeah it is... i think


http://firealpaca.com/en

 

[Keitara]

*jumps in*

stalk mode ON
too amazing art. for a girl being 12 years old omg!
when I was your age my art was like ketchup mixed with mayonnaise omg
too amazing stuff here

*jumps away*

 

[deerui]

*jumps in*

stalk mode ON
too amazing art. for a girl being 12 years old omg!
when I was your age my art was like ketchup mixed with mayonnaise omg
too amazing stuff here

*jumps away*

awe thank <3 ; v ;; you're so sweet, i thought most artist around my age had around the same or better art tbh

 

[matcha]

you definitely need to work on anatomy and colouring, your anatomy is all over the place and it isn't an aesthetically pleasing style choice either. especially the drawing you posted yesterday, eyes don't go past the skull and into the hairline like that. your colouring just looks really unclean in some parts, you can see a lot of little uncoloured pixels here and there.

and i feel the need to point out a lot of your art looks like it was traced from k-on.

 

[deerui]

you definitely need to work on anatomy and colouring, your anatomy is all over the place and it isn't an aesthetically pleasing style choice either. especially the drawing you posted yesterday, eyes don't go past the skull and into the hairline like that. your colouring just looks really unclean in some parts, you can see a lot of little uncoloured pixels here and there.

and i feel the need to point out a lot of your art looks like it was traced from k-on.

ahh, thanks for the critique, I hated the one i posted yesterday, i rushed on it. And, i am trying on anatomy, though, it takes time, i guess. I'll try to fix the uncolored pieces, but what do you mean by unclean? what's wrong with it?
Though, the eye going into the hair is a certain drawing style, many people do it when it comes to anime-like art
And lastly, i for real dont know what you mean by that? my art looks nothing like K-ON! :/

 

[matcha]

just clean up your colours, in one of the last pieces you drew you could see the white from her eyes go past the eye's outline and into her skin. you can also see little white uncoloured bits here and there.

and it's really just my opinion, the eyes going through hair style choice does seem a little silly, even if it's done by 'professionals'. it's not a style i'm personally fond of but to each their own. if you do want to try that out definitely make the eyes a little more even in the future. i find that even when anime artists do that, they usually make it look like the eye is behind the hair, rather than making it look like the eye is actually over top of the hair, if that makes sense.

the way you draw eyes definitely reminded me of k-on eyes.

 

[deerui]

just clean up your colours, in one of the last pieces you drew you could see the white from her eyes go past the eye's outline and into her skin. you can also see little white uncoloured bits here and there.

and it's really just my opinion, the eyes going through hair style choice does seem a little silly, even if it's done by 'professionals'. it's not a style i'm personally fond of but to each their own. if you do want to try that out definitely make the eyes a little more even in the future. i find that even when anime artists do that, they usually make it look like the eye is behind the hair, rather than making it look like the eye is actually over top of the hair, if that makes sense.

the way you draw eyes definitely reminded me of k-on eyes.

well, i do agree on the old one of the 'improvement' spoiler , it is like k-on, but the newer one i dont think is, but thanks for the help, ill take the coloring tips into consideration

 

[deerui]

Spoiler: finally made a gemsona i like, after 5 attempts

its zircon, she has her gem on her left ear! cx

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[toastia]

hi can you give me credit for it being my OC