first sig :)

to put the image on the page do
 
You will get better, trust me, have high hopes if thats your first, my first was an abomination....

practice makes perfect my friend =]
 
I think the background could do with improving but you'll get better :D
 
There is no border and the text doesn't fit at all. The text would also need to be a different color because gold on green is unattractive.
 
I might be harsh in my reveiw, but this is my opinion.

That could have gone a lot better.

Try not squishing everything.
Try lightening the echoes to where they're not as dark and make them more transparent.
The whole thing looked compacted together.
Try not making the background and the font clash.
 
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