Forecast For Sadness

[Numner]

Clouds casting over me
Laughing every time I fall
Blocking out the sunshine
Making the whole world feel gloomy
They stare at me with the eyes of death
Watching my every movement
Putting pain in my every step
I keep my head up
I put on a fake smile
For I don't wish to disappoint the ones I love


I was listening to "Behind the Sea" again, it was kind hard to finish this poem doing so xD

I'm probably gonna fixupate it later

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Clouds casting over me
Laughing every time I trip + fall [+]
Blocking at [ <- xD ] + out[+] the sunshine
Making the whole world feel gloomy
They stare at me with the eyes of death
Watching my every movement
Putting pain in my every step
I keep my head up
I put on a fake smile
+ For [+] don't wish to disappoint + the ones I love [+]
The ones I love

 

[technoxmaniac]

Makes me want to stab babies.

 

[melly]

Well done, I like how you captured the feelings/words
Its similar to what ppl do today

like when ppl are in pain deep down inside but they smile to cover it,
its like they don't let anyone help them
and that leads to lonelyness, bitterness and sometimes suicide

 

[Numner]

Makes me want to stab babies.

Well I am sorry ):

Babies are not meant for stabbing o=

 

[technoxmaniac]

Makes me want to stab babies.

Well I am sorry ):

Babies are not meant for stabbing o=

It made me not sad.

 

[adorkable x]

OMG IMA CRY

 

[Numner]

Makes me want to stab babies.

Well I am sorry ):

Babies are not meant for stabbing o=

It made me not sad.

Ikr?
I was listening to a relatively happy song

I made this when my puppy died:
http://numner.deviantart.com/art/Golden-Lined-Smile-134759424

 

[melly]

Makes me want to stab babies.

Well I am sorry ):

Babies are not meant for stabbing o=

It made me not sad.

Ikr?
I was listening to a relatively happy song

I made this when my puppy died:
http://numner.deviantart.com/art/Golden-Lined-Smile-134759424

awwe,
hey, theres more poems on deviantart,woot! I added ya (melmelly)

 

[Vooloo]

Makes me want to stab babies.

Well I am sorry ):

Babies are not meant for stabbing o=

It made me not sad.

Ikr?
I was listening to a relatively happy song

I made this when my puppy died:
http://numner.deviantart.com/art/Golden-Lined-Smile-134759424

awwe,
hey, theres more poems on deviantart,woot! I added ya (melmelly)

Add me too. I'm Hatsumikiiu since my other account got banned.

 

[Zex]

Makes me want to stab babies.

 

[melly]

Quoting limited to 5 levels deep

It made me not sad.

Ikr?
I was listening to a relatively happy song

I made this when my puppy died:
http://numner.deviantart.com/art/Golden-Lined-Smile-134759424

awwe,
hey, theres more poems on deviantart,woot! I added ya (melmelly)

Add me too. I'm Hatsumikiiu since my other account got banned.

ur link says that "this page has expired" XD

 

[Numner]

Quoting limited to 5 levels deep

Ikr?
I was listening to a relatively happy song

I made this when my puppy died:
http://numner.deviantart.com/art/Golden-Lined-Smile-134759424

awwe,
hey, theres more poems on deviantart,woot! I added ya (melmelly)

Add me too. I'm Hatsumikiiu since my other account got banned.

ur ]www.hatsumiiku.deviantart.com

And I know it wasn't exactly my best, I just wanted to finish a 4 line one I wrote o=

 

[Nightray]

cool