Fullbody chibi advice and critique

[biibii]

would you buy it?
what would you Price it?
should i sell this one as an adopt?
does it look good?
please critique
be nice!!​

 

[axo]

omg it's adorable. Im not good at pricing but I would definitely buy it.

 

[Gooomy]

I really like it! I think you should put a little more shading into it, but the proportions and everything else look fine! :V

 

[biibii]

ty!

 

[bloomwaker]

I'm not good at pricing, but it's very nice!

Some very minor nitpicks:
I'm assuming the lining and color are limitations on the program itself as well as a stylistic choice. If possible, vary the weight of the lines a little? I'd also watch varying widths for the same limb types, since the leg on our left is noticeably thicker than the one on our right. Elbow placement is also important. For quick reference, it's usually lined up with the belly button, in a sort of arc.

Some very messy examples (oops), but there you go!
I'd say the leg fix really depends on your preference, either one works.

 

[biibii]

YES THANK YOU I WAS WAITING FOR SOMEONE TO FIX MY LEG tysm
it was rlly bothering me that no one mentioned it

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also yes i draw these on my 3ds

 

[bloomwaker]

3DS drawing is hardcore. I can't draw on tiny canvases lmao.

 

[Llust]

the left thigh seems bigger than the right one, so try evening them out next time. to be blunt, the face and body proportions need some work and if you're using sai, the ink pen tool should be used for lineart, anything thats best for you can be used for coloring, and the marker is recommended for shading. if you dont have sai, i can send you the program through skype if you want. its a really simple program that provides all the tools you'd need

everything else is really cute though, i can help you out with highlights and shading if you'd like

 

[biibii]

the left thigh seems bigger than the right one, so try evening them out next time. to be blunt, the face and body proportions need some work and if you're using sai, the ink pen tool should be used for lineart, anything thats best for you can be used for coloring, and the marker is recommended for shading. if you dont have sai, i can send you the program through skype if you want. its a really simple program that provides all the tools you'd need

everything else is really cute though, i can help you out with highlights and shading if you'd like

as i said earlier in the thread, i draw on my 3ds bc i cannot afford a tablet.
thanks.
also someone already said the thigh thing, but thanks.
id love the shading and hl help

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3DS drawing is hardcore. I can't draw on tiny canvases lmao.

ill take this as a compliment! <3

 

[Llust]

as i said earlier in the thread, i draw on my 3ds bc i cannot afford a tablet.
thanks.
also someone already said the thigh thing, but thanks.
id love the shading and hl help

ah- sorry, i must have missed that
im not sure what the color limits are for 3ds, but for shading--never use black/gray. instead, use a color of a slightly darker shade than the base color. to top it off, use an even darker color so you have three layers of colors. of course, the colors will vary on the base colors.

as for highlights, try to avoid using white unless you don't have any other option. use a pastel shade or the brightest shade of the base color, it goes well together like that..but how well it looks depends on the resolution of everything and the program

its difficult for me to explain in words, so would you like me to put together a tutorial instead and send it to you later?

 

[PeeBraiin]

I would definitely buy one for like 20-40 tbt.
Are you currently taking requests?
I need more art for my sig~
(Pm me if interested uvu)

 

[Money Hunter]

i was going to redline it but looks like someone already did :3 Good luck!

 

[biibii]

@soushi_ sure i would love that !!!

 

[Tinkalila]

I think it's really great! You draw very well. But I also think you could get more money for your art if you tried drawing on a computer! Smooth lines and transparent drawings are often worth more! I use Medibang Paint Pro. It's free and easy to learn how to use, I would absolutely recommend it! And if you're ever looking into buying a tablet, I use the Wacom Bamboo Create Pen tablet, it's worked very well ever since I got it about 3 years ago! I hope you have luck with selling your art, and let me know if you ever wanna do an art trade! (a link to my deviantArt is in my sig)

 

[biibii]

thank you thats so sweet ! ^^^^

 

[biibii]

drew a new one and tried shading and everything...
how much would this one be worth?