have some unfinished art student draws

[gorgonara]

Im also takin requests n junk because i should really be drawing more

 

[gorgonara]

these are all recent doodles and junk because in class all we've been doing for ages is anatomy and its all kinda inaprope for here

and my scanner is broke so enjoy poo-ey phone quality

 

[Caius]

Your use of gestural lines is very good, as is your weight. From what I'm seeing you excel at composition, and these could easily be considered finished from my perspective.

The only issues I've spotted are with your third drawing from the top. Something about it turns me away. It seems to not fit in with the group when it comes to style. If I could wager a guess, I'd say it's an earlier drawing than the rest of them considering how much more free your strokes seem.

Add some value to your cheeks, lips, chin, and make them stand out a bit more with just color and not pencil. The results may surprise you.

 

[gorgonara]

Your use of gestural lines is very good, as is your weight. From what I'm seeing you excel at composition, and these could easily be considered finished from my perspective.

The only issues I've spotted are with your third drawing from the top. Something about it turns me away. It seems to not fit in with the group when it comes to style. If I could wager a guess, I'd say it's an earlier drawing than the rest of them considering how much more free your strokes seem.

Add some value to your cheeks, lips, chin, and make them stand out a bit more with just color and not pencil. The results may surprise you.

thanks babydoll, I eat critique up yo. And yeah, Im still fairly new to coloring and its all a bit scary. And I really wanna post my entire sketchbook pages because I got mad collage skillz and some really nice drawings, but there's usually like a boob per page. :C

B'yeah send me requests and ideas, preferably crossing-related. My art teacher's been bumming me about drawing things other than creepy androgynous watercolour people and i need practice.