Panda Bear Senpai
Mayor of Lilycove
I never took any art classes so I have no idea what I'm doing.
No Name OC:
Another no name oc:
Jirachi:
Another no name oc:
Akali:
I know Akali's hand is too chubby. ;A;
rip
Help me get better?
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I never took any art classes so I have no idea what I'm doing.
I know Akali's hand is too chubby. ;A;
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Hyoshido
Sometimes, he do miss
Yeah I'm sort of wondering why you're asking for help, you're really decent for not going to art classes.
Only thing I can really suggest is adding more contrast on the lines in lighter and darker areas, I think that'd look really neat, personally.
Hope to see more from you!
Only thing I can really suggest is adding more contrast on the lines in lighter and darker areas, I think that'd look really neat, personally.
Hope to see more from you!
Panda Bear Senpai
Mayor of Lilycove
Bc I don't know what I'm doing.
lmao
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Thank you, I think I should add more detail too cause they all look so plain to me.
Shirohibiki
it's a beautiful bikini bottom day!
wtf i love your art
i suck at criticism so all i can say is that you got some fine art m'dear <3
i suck at criticism so all i can say is that you got some fine art m'dear <3
RadiantScone
Wine Lover
I came here expecting to see decent art and was blown away by how stunning yours is. Just, woah, i dont think you need to improve.
snowblizzard24
Senior Member
Wow! What are you talking about? These are beautiful! I really like the pattern details you've added.
The Jirachi girl looks kind of stiff though in comparison to your other pieces. Try to make it flow more. Make the s line less inward to make it more natural and work on the arms to make it less boxy looking. It's mainly the pose though. If they were sitting down together maybe it would have been less stiff? I love Jirachi itself though c:
The girl holding the pillow might also need some work on the shading. You don't have to focus on every single edge that might seem to look like it could have some shadows, just focus on how the light might hit certain angles. I usually look at a well-lit picture of people to see how the light would hit them.
The hands also definitely need work of course. Some are too skinny while some like with Akali is too big lol. You should think of the hands as a bunch of lines, circles, and cylinders with little circles as the joints.
Overall though, your art is some of the best ones I've seen^^ I'm not really good at critiquing, but hopefully I was of some help. I would also totally buy your art if you ever open up a shop!
The Jirachi girl looks kind of stiff though in comparison to your other pieces. Try to make it flow more. Make the s line less inward to make it more natural and work on the arms to make it less boxy looking. It's mainly the pose though. If they were sitting down together maybe it would have been less stiff? I love Jirachi itself though c:
The girl holding the pillow might also need some work on the shading. You don't have to focus on every single edge that might seem to look like it could have some shadows, just focus on how the light might hit certain angles. I usually look at a well-lit picture of people to see how the light would hit them.
The hands also definitely need work of course. Some are too skinny while some like with Akali is too big lol. You should think of the hands as a bunch of lines, circles, and cylinders with little circles as the joints.
Overall though, your art is some of the best ones I've seen^^ I'm not really good at critiquing, but hopefully I was of some help. I would also totally buy your art if you ever open up a shop!
Panda Bear Senpai
Mayor of Lilycove
fingers are my enemy. I'll work on that and shading though. ty
I don't think I might open an art shop though. Last time I took a request the person didn't pay xD
cheezyfries
ANDREW MCMAHON
your art is so good, i think that a lot of people would buy if you started a shop! you could always make it so that you'll start drawing after someone pays~
Hyoshido
Sometimes, he do miss
Dang, it sucks when you work hard and they scam your efforts :/
Could always ask them to pay full first or pay half and you send them a sketch, then they pay the rest before you give them the full piece.
Easiest routes to be honest!
Could always ask them to pay full first or pay half and you send them a sketch, then they pay the rest before you give them the full piece.
Easiest routes to be honest!
tamagotchi
i'm not mean
gee wiz, i wonder what this looks like!
hm... i wonder
whatever could that transparency be for??
and yours was drawn 34 days ago??
hm,,,,
HMMMM,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
http://amanochio.deviantart.com/art/Blood-Moon-Akali-sketch-430856686
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gee wiz, i wonder what this looks like!
hm... i wonder
whatever could that transparency be for??
http://amanochio.deviantart.com/art/Blood-Moon-Akali-sketch-430856686
omg
and to think i thought u were a good artist
SuperVandal
got a blank space bb
there's a storm comin', mister wayne...
Look up, friend.
MoonlightAbsol
back to drawing
Welp. I was gonna compliment on the great art but… things just got awkward :/
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