How does this quick chibi look?

[Locket]

I'm trying to draw a chibi. I'm wondering how this looks so far.

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Opinions?

 

[skarmoury]

Arms are kinda long and awkward, you should probably erase the lines of the arms beneath her clothes, her eyes are kinda large, and maybe you should try coloring to make it look brighter? c:

 

[piichinu]

neck too wide arms too long hair too poorly shaped body too strange eyes too close etc keep practicing.

 

[chapstick]

I love it!

 

[Locket]

Arms are kinda long and awkward, you should probably erase the lines of the arms beneath her clothes, her eyes are kinda large, and maybe you should try coloring to make it look brighter? c:

ok! I was to lazy to color XD

 

[Rasha]

you need to put more effort in your art because this looks lazy. the supposedly chibi looks like a bunch of lines thrown together so please consider focusing more on the details and practicing the basics of sketching. good luck