Vex L'Cour
Weebalicious Furry.
Remember awhile ago i said i wanted to make a zombie novel? This is a scene which is nearish to the begining, essentially the outbreak has struck and a large part of oxford has been infected. The main character (me) and his best friend (Jacob) have just managed to get away from a crowd of Zombies (after watching another friend being eaten). They get back to Jacob's House to find noone home.
"Well at least we're back home" Jacob said, almost trying to shout and whisper at the same time as he fiddled with the door to make it lock, even though the lock was broken due to the drunken rage he had one night. "Look, lets concentrate on boarding up windows, barricades, weaponary and then food before we relax" I whispered back. We then set to work, starting in the kitchen first, then making our way round room by room, We ripped apart chairs, tables, work tops, sofas and several other things to make barricades, we used a small toolbox which had a slightly rusty saw, a hammer, a few nails of every size and a screwdriver to try and make our home a small fort. As we got to the lounge we both saw that the back door was smashed in, we had forgotten to check it, we both looked at each other and gulped, "We better board this up pronto" Jacob said with a quiver in his voice as he picked up one of the sofa parts, as he put it across the middle of the door and was about to put in the first nail he whispered "Connor..? Connor...Theres some of thoose...things, in the garden." I quickly ran over and there were several people in the garden...eating what appeared to be someone who had ran into our garden to escape them. "gross...." I said, covering my mouth in fear i was about to throw up. we then got to work trying to silently board up the doorway, as a few more 'Zombies' decended upon the corpse, it was like watching one of thoose nature programs, i could almost hear Sir David Attenborugh talking as they ate.
After a few tense minutes we had nearly barricaded the door, when Jacob dropped the hammer on my foot. "OW! WHAT THE HELL YOU DOING JACOB?! THAT REALL----" I shouted before slowly turning to look outside, the 'Zombies' stopped eating and looked at us with their blank expressions, for a few seconds time almost seemed like it had stood still, then they got up and ran toward us, snarling. "QUICK! GET THE LAST BIT DONE!" I shouted trying to quickly finish the barricade, we managed to put in the last nail and they ran up to the door and hit it, we could hear them scratching at it like wild animals, we quickly stepped back and stared at the door. "well......Hopefully thats sorted that problem eh?" I said, with a slightly confident smile, then Jacob turned to me, his face pale and shocked "Wait....The door was bashed down.....and when we left it was fine.""I know that" I replied, then i relised what he was getting at, we both slowly turned round to see there was a large figure in the doorway, its height was abnormal and it had a large left shoulder for a very odd reason, due to the lack of light we could only see the figure, it moaned for a few seconds, like every other zombie it seemed to be mournfull in its moan. "......Oh.......*censored.2.0*" we both said softly, as it made its way toward us.
Now, this scene was made to introduce the 'Mutated', which were similer to Zombies but would have some sort of 'Super Power' per say (nothing ********, just stuff like speed etc). The one here has a large amount of power in its left arm (where as its right arm is relitivly weak, Leading onto the next discovery that the Mutated ALWAYS have a drawback). Also im wondering whether to do the cheesy thing and introduce another character at this point or have the Mutated die in some really accidental but kinda funny way.
C+C would be nice
"Well at least we're back home" Jacob said, almost trying to shout and whisper at the same time as he fiddled with the door to make it lock, even though the lock was broken due to the drunken rage he had one night. "Look, lets concentrate on boarding up windows, barricades, weaponary and then food before we relax" I whispered back. We then set to work, starting in the kitchen first, then making our way round room by room, We ripped apart chairs, tables, work tops, sofas and several other things to make barricades, we used a small toolbox which had a slightly rusty saw, a hammer, a few nails of every size and a screwdriver to try and make our home a small fort. As we got to the lounge we both saw that the back door was smashed in, we had forgotten to check it, we both looked at each other and gulped, "We better board this up pronto" Jacob said with a quiver in his voice as he picked up one of the sofa parts, as he put it across the middle of the door and was about to put in the first nail he whispered "Connor..? Connor...Theres some of thoose...things, in the garden." I quickly ran over and there were several people in the garden...eating what appeared to be someone who had ran into our garden to escape them. "gross...." I said, covering my mouth in fear i was about to throw up. we then got to work trying to silently board up the doorway, as a few more 'Zombies' decended upon the corpse, it was like watching one of thoose nature programs, i could almost hear Sir David Attenborugh talking as they ate.
After a few tense minutes we had nearly barricaded the door, when Jacob dropped the hammer on my foot. "OW! WHAT THE HELL YOU DOING JACOB?! THAT REALL----" I shouted before slowly turning to look outside, the 'Zombies' stopped eating and looked at us with their blank expressions, for a few seconds time almost seemed like it had stood still, then they got up and ran toward us, snarling. "QUICK! GET THE LAST BIT DONE!" I shouted trying to quickly finish the barricade, we managed to put in the last nail and they ran up to the door and hit it, we could hear them scratching at it like wild animals, we quickly stepped back and stared at the door. "well......Hopefully thats sorted that problem eh?" I said, with a slightly confident smile, then Jacob turned to me, his face pale and shocked "Wait....The door was bashed down.....and when we left it was fine.""I know that" I replied, then i relised what he was getting at, we both slowly turned round to see there was a large figure in the doorway, its height was abnormal and it had a large left shoulder for a very odd reason, due to the lack of light we could only see the figure, it moaned for a few seconds, like every other zombie it seemed to be mournfull in its moan. "......Oh.......*censored.2.0*" we both said softly, as it made its way toward us.
Now, this scene was made to introduce the 'Mutated', which were similer to Zombies but would have some sort of 'Super Power' per say (nothing ********, just stuff like speed etc). The one here has a large amount of power in its left arm (where as its right arm is relitivly weak, Leading onto the next discovery that the Mutated ALWAYS have a drawback). Also im wondering whether to do the cheesy thing and introduce another character at this point or have the Mutated die in some really accidental but kinda funny way.
C+C would be nice
