my gates are open wifi on party

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yep im having a wifi on party please come yes wifi is on my gates are open
 
#1 finally wifi is back... took nintendo long enough
#2 madison of townsvil... make your sig smaller, you are streching the page!. put it in a spoiler at least
#3 and why is it so sloppy...
-edit-
#4 its =D Good to have ya back, Wi-Fi! With the comma after back.
-edit 2-
#5 Make the B in back lowercase.
#6 put a ' after ya because its slang... so
all together

<big><big>=D Good to have ya' back, Wi-Fi!</big></big>

-its neat
-it doesnt stretch the page
-it doesnt have any grammar errors

-edit 3-
#7Put It's before 'Good'... so

=D It's good to have ya' back, Wi-Fi!

-edit 4-
#8 change your '2' to 'to'

#9 Capitalize the 'F' in Wi-Fi
 
Palad said:
[n,Dec 28 2008, 02:35:49 AM]#1 finally wifi is back... took nintendo long enough
#2 madison of townsvil... make your sig smaller, you are streching the page!. put it in a spoiler at least
#3 and why is it so sloppy...
-edit-
#4. its =D Good to have ya back, Wi-Fi! With the comma after back.
so critical,lol
 
Paladin said:
#1 finally wifi is back... took nintendo long enough
#2 madison of townsvil... make your sig smaller, you are streching the page!. put it in a spoiler at least
#3 and why is it so sloppy...
-edit-
#4 its =D Good to have ya back, Wi-Fi! With the comma after back.
-edit 2-
#5 Make the B in back lowercase.
#6 put a ' after ya because its slang... so
all together

<big><big>=D Good to have ya' back, Wi-Fi!</big></big>

-its neat
-it doesnt stretch the page
-it doesnt have any grammar errors
Note i edited it again. Btw nice job resizing it
 
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