My Life,My Rules

[MissCrochetKitten]

Hi.I just moved to MoonTown in January.Now the snow is all gone,and spring is here.Everything is green and peaceful.I have a good sized house,lots of great friends,and there's a department store right here in town.It's a lot warmer today.I looked up at the sky.It's not going to be cold for very much longer.I wonder if Tortimer will have some kind of festival.Although it's spring,it's still pretty cold even during the day,so I have to wear my fancy black designer coat and a scarf,plus whatever accessories I decide to wear.I recently learned how to crochet,so I'm quite good at it now.Today I'm wearing a pair of wristlets I made,my warm scarf,and my coat.Plus my have black dress,knee socks,and some cute heels I picked up in the next town over.What can I say?I like style.I took my cellphone out of my pocket.Hmm,one new email,an invitation,and a notice about a sale.I texted Bree.What are you doing tonight?I'm kind of bored,are you going to The Roost tonight?I need some coffee...I hit send.
Ding."Yes,I do have plans,no,I'm not going to The Roost,and why do you need coffee?!?"
Dong."Because I'm super tired.To bad you have plans.What are your plans anyway?"
Ding."Why are you super tired?Butch offered to take me on a date tonight,so that's my plan.Now I have to get ready or I'll be late,Cya!"
Dong."Oh,okay!Have lots of fun!"

 

[Bacon Boy]

Welcome to the Bell Tree?
This should be in the introductions?

 

[MDofDarkheart]

It's a short story. It should be in the museum.

 

[Bacon Boy]

It's a short story. It should be in the museum.

See, I don't know. This seems like a roleplaying intro to me. The lack of spacing causes me to think twice about the short story.

 

[MissCrochetKitten]

Oh great.It's raining.What could be worse?The weather person said it was supposed to be sunny.I hate the rain.It's cold,it's wet,and makes everything muddy.On the other hand,it does make everything sparkly fresh once it dries up.As far as I could see,no one was outside.I work hard in my town.I pick weeds,plant flowers and trees,pick up trash,and make paths.I even made a well.I can't believe it's raining!I had a meeting today!Knock knock.I jumped out of my chair.Who would be outside n this weather?I opened the door.There was a human,standing right in front of me,soaking and clearly cold.
"Umm,my name is Spike.I was passing through town when the storm hit.Mind if I stay here?"
"Sure.Come in,I'll get some towels."Who is he,and what is he doing here?He was following me to the guest bedroom.I looked at him from the corner of my eye.He had bright red hair,done up in spikes.He wore a black shirt,tan shorts,and black shoes.He carried a tan bag.
"Here are the towels.The bathroom is right around that screen over there."I said,pointing to the screen.
"Thanks."
"Dinner will be ready soon."
"Okay."
I left the room,shutting the door behind me.He's a bit of a creep...

 

[MDofDarkheart]

I like it so far.
You really are a good writer.
Though you are lacking the spacing for someone to believe it's a story and not an RP opening.

 

[MissCrochetKitten]

Oh,okay!Thanks for the tips!Glad you like it!

 

[Kaiaa]

I like this short story. I've secretly been waiting for someone to make an Animal Crossing story lol Keep up the good work!

p.s. Not to be rude but it would make it easier on my eyes, and others, if you would put spaces between your periods and the start of the next sentence

 

[MissCrochetKitten]

That girl sure is nice enough to let me stay here.But,as big as this house is,I have to wonder if she lives alone.I surveyed the room.There was a big regal bed in the cent of the back wall,there was a regal sofa at the end of the bed,in front of that was a regal table,then a fireplace.The rest of the regal series lined the walls.Who the heck is she anyway,she must be rich and famous as big as this house is.I noticed something on the mantle of the fireplace.I carefully walked over.It was a collection of photos,one was a large portrait,with a young,happy girl in a white dress receiving an award.In another photo,there was a mother,father,and the same young girl in it.This must be her family.

Knock knock."Excuse me,but I brought more towels,may I come in?"
I immediately sat in a chair,and answered in my usual way.
"Yeah,sure,whatever."
The door opened and in came the same girl in the pictures,but taller and more mature.
"I also brought hot chocolate.Dinner is ready in the dining room."She turned and left.Why did she leave so suddenly?

I stumbled around the large house until she came and found me.We went into a normal kitchen/dining room.I'll tell you now.I'm not very good at hiding my feelings when I'm surprised.

"Why are you so surprised?"She asked me,frowning.
"Um,nothing!I just expected something a little more fancy,this isn't what I'm used to."Okay,I just lied to the prettiest girl I've ever seen.
"Oh,well,I'm sorry you don't like it!Now,I have to leave for a meeting.I'll be back around eight,and don't you dare think about going upstairs!"She said angrily,and got up.After a few minutes,I heard the door slam.I rushed to a window.It had stopped raining,and she was walking speedily away.Once she was out of sight,I bolted up the stairs.I entered the first door,the only door.

I stepped in and looked around.The place was relatively dark,but that wasn't because of the lights.This room had purple and black walls,and a bare wooden floor.I saw a college of photos on the wall to my right,and against the other wall was a polished wooden desk.There was a half finished letter on it.In the corner,there was a purple and black bed,and next to it was a small night stand with a lamp.Underneath a window was a floor mat,and a basket with several balls of yarn,some hook-thingies,and sewing needles,I noticed that garlands of black and purple lanterns hung from the ceiling.They glowed dimly,the only light in the room that was on.

I was so wrapped up in my thoughts,that I didn't here the door open and footsteps coming up the stairs.
"What are you doing here?!I told you to NEVER come in here and you did it anyway!How could you?To think I trusted you!"She said it so fiercely that I was almost scared.
"Yeah,whatever.I'm tired.I'm going to bed."I said.I looked for the surprise in her face,but there was none.

 

[Keenan]

I like this short story. I've secretly been waiting for someone to make an Animal Crossing story lol Keep up the good work!

p.s. Not to be rude but it would make it easier on my eyes, and others, if you would put spaces between your periods and the start of the next sentence

If you want to see a great animal crossing story, you should watch the series by Mranimalcrossing. It's really well made, but it's in Japanese (I'm assuming) with English subtitles.

@Topic- The story is great, keep it up! I agree about the spaces though.

 

[MissCrochetKitten]

"I mean,what was he thinking!?! I told him not to go in there! Yet he did it anyway! He's lost all my trust,that's for sure!"I said to Mitzi. Mitzi just moved into town not that long ago, but we're already best friends.
"Yeah, I agree. He should never have gone in there. But he is the only human around,and he is a boy. Maybe you should forgive him."
"Yeah, maybe you're right. But he's so strange, and not once had he thanked me for letting him stay here."
"That's true, but still, think about it,okay?"She said, as she got up to leave.
"Okay, will do. Bye Mitzi."I got up and went up stairs.I hope he didn't find anything out. I wonder what he's doing locked up in the guest room? I sat on my bed,thinking. I go to parties a lot,but maybe I'm not supposed to?I've never told anyone before,but they've never asked...Knock knock.

"Can I come in?"He asks me.Here we go again.
"Yeah...sure."He comes in,and stands right in front of me. It feels like he's looking through my soul...
"I've come to tell you something.I've been looking for someone for a very long time.And that person is you.Your kingdom is in great danger,you must help."
"Look,if this is supposed to be some kind of prank,it isn't-"
"It's not a prank! Here,I'll show you your past, before you were reborn."

In the moon kingdom.

"Dear,it's time. The others have come. We must fight to keep our kingdom. Come."
"Can we not find an agreement? Must there be violence and hate and wretchedness?"
"No,besides,if they are defeated now,they will not come back."

The battle rages,a fierce and ugly fight,but in the middle of it all,there is the princess of the moon,lying,weak and beaten. Just before the moon kingdom is destroyed,the queen of the moon sends the princess,her protectors,and the prince of the earth to earth,to be reborn and forget there past,and live normal lives.

"You mean to say, that I'M a PRINCESS???"

 

[MissCrochetKitten]

It's been several weeks since that strange boy went away. I kicked him out whenever he told me I was a 'princess'. I mean,come on! Me,a princess? Not possible. It looks like the snow has finally melted. I wonder how warm it is? I opened the door and walked a step outside. Brr,it's freezing outside! I still need to take a trip outside though,and I need to drop off that book at Mitzi'x anyway. I walked upstairs. I grabbed a dress that I had made to look like Hatsune Miku's,a coat,my cellphone,and a pair of gloves. I walked out of the house,ready to start walking,when someone taps me on the shoulder.

"Oh,hey Pierce! Long time no see,huh?"I said.
"Yeah! I was wondering,I thought you might want to come train with me today?"He replied,looking hopeful.
"Hey,thanks for the offer,but I've got plans though. Maybe some other time?"I told him.
"Yeah sure.Have fun."He turned and walked away. I sighed. Well,on to Mitzi's! As I walked away from my house,I looked back. I've had a lot of good and bad times here. I wonder what it would be like if I moved? I'd been asking myself that a lot. I knocked on Mitzi's door.

"Come in,meow."
"Hello Mitzi! I came to return the book you loaned me!"I said.
"Oh thank you! Well,did you like how it turned out? I was so surprised at the ending!"Mitzi replied,cheerfully giggling.
"Yeah,me to! I laughed so hard!Well,I have to go now,Mitzi. Thanks for loaning me the book!"
"No problem! Drop by anytime,meow!"

 

[Max12]

Guys,
i also want to say something about it. I like it so far.
You really are a excellent author. Though you are missing the space for someone to believe, it's a tale and not an rp starting.