My Motto + Preview on the short story i made on wii-net

[Kanye Omari West]

I stay dead quiet
And hold emotions in
That's why
I always win.

My Motto,
As i vent emotions out
Is
Keep dead silent now
Then start to pout.

YES IT'S THE SAME FORMAT AS "Motto" BY Langston Hughes

SHORT STORY PREVIEW
Arekkusu opened his eyes and remembered the jam he was in with Brosley. He knew he was in a tight spot. When he least expected it, his best friend Tim appeared.
"AREKKUSU, HEY!" He shouted.
Brosley immediately teleported out and Tim caught up.

 

[Garrett x50 cal]

Nice job Alecks : ) I like it