Need Critique For New Art Style!

[Tianna]

So I recently just developed a new art style for drawing cats and I really only have one drawing of it so far. I need your guys' opinion on it and how much you would pay for something like this because I'm thinking of doing a "will draw your mayor as a cat" commissions thing.



Also, that is my main OC, Marble. :3

P.S. Please note that I DO take my time and effort on these kind of drawings and can't just sketch them up instantaneously. For the drawing above, it took me a good hour and a half to draw it (it might take less now though).

 

[milkyi]

I think its really cute!

 

[Tianna]

I think its really cute!

Thank you very much! <3

 

[Hettie]

Aww, she's adorable! She reminds me of vanilla ice cream with rainbow sprinkles. I would personally pay 100 btb for one, but you should charge based on the time and effort you put in to them I think.

 

[Tianna]

Aww, she's adorable! She reminds me of vanilla ice cream with rainbow sprinkles. I would personally pay 100 btb for one, but you should charge based on the time and effort you put in to them I think.

Thank you and I will keep that in mind. I just need some people's opinions on it so I can decide the final price on these.

 

[Toot]

It's cool. What's that behind it's eye?

 

[Tianna]

It's cool. What's that behind it's eye?

Thanks! And what are you referring to exactly? ^^;

 

[Toot]

That black thing behind the eye. Or at least I think its the eye. The purple circle with the heart highlights. Lol.

 

[Tianna]

That black thing behind the eye. Or at least I think its the eye. The purple circle with the heart highlights. Lol.

Ya that's the eye lol. And I think you're referring to the eyelashes??

 

[Toot]

Ya that's the eye lol. And I think you're referring to the eyelashes??

Oh okay I can see it now. It just looked a little weird at first. Lol.

 

[Jamborenium]

it's cute though her face looks a bit more dog like then cat like due to the face shape, also the ears are a shaped differently from a cat as well

but besides that she has a cute design and the rainbows on her aren't eye blinding​

 

[mayor-essy]

It's so colorful and cute. *o* But what Nebudelic said. She looks a bit dog-like. But nonetheless it's super adorable. >.<

 

[Tianna]

it's cute though her face looks a bit more dog like then cat like due to the face shape, also the ears are a shaped differently from a cat as well

but besides that she has a cute design and the rainbows on her aren't eye blinding​

Thanks and I know lol, I'm still kinda working on the style and the ears are meant to look like that (inspired by some other kawaii cat artists on deviantART and I'm keeping them like that).

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It's so colorful and cute. *o* But what Nebudelic said. She looks a bit dog-like. But nonetheless it's super adorable. >.<

Thank you! And ya, I'm working on it :3.

 

[Jamborenium]

Thanks and I know lol, I'm still kinda working on the style and the ears are meant to look like that (inspired by some other kawaii cat artists on deviantART and I'm keeping them like that).

ah I see well then okee dokee :U

 

[mintellect]

This is very cute and well done!

Did you draw the one in your avatar and sig?

 

[Tianna]

This is very cute and well done!

Did you draw the one in your avatar and sig?

Thanks so much!! And no actually, two of my friends on deviantART drew my signature and avatar. :3

 

[TheAbleSistersShow]

I see others have already pointed out that it could use some more cat features. Keep working on that.
Honestly, I would reconsider the choice to make the cat rainbow. It can sometimes be a bit visually overwhelming to use too many bright, saturated colors. Perhaps consider picking a color palette and working with that?

 

[Tianna]

Oh actually, there's a bit of a story to why she's rainbow... ^^;

Do you see the two cats in my signature?

Both of them represent my two different and yet opposite personalities.

So ya... She's staying rainbow due to that... :3