Need halp with my new chibi style I'm trying to develop ;3;/

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So I'm trying to develop a new art style. I'm starting out with faces/hair.
I love the eyes in this, but I feel like the color of the eyes is too bright?? Or does it look good that way?
I also think the details in the hair look odd. And the colors seem odd too.
I just need a bit of advice on how to improve ;v;
I will probably do freebies later so I can practice drawing some cool faces 8)

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IT LOOKS SO BRIGHT HOLY CRAP
IS IT JUST ME OR WAT
HALPPP

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The longer I look at this the more my eyes burn.
 
omg! it's soooo adorable!
the only thing, is they eyes are all the same color of green, try shading the eyes with different shades of greens.
It would lesser the intensity and add some sweet depth.
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Eye-Tutorial-461359868

though I love the heart inside they eye, I'm swooning at how cute your chibi is!
 
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omg! it's soooo adorable!
the only thing, is they eyes are all the same color of green, try shading the eyes with different shades of greens.
It would lesser the intensity and add some sweet depth.
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Eye-Tutorial-461359868

though I love the heart inside they eye, I'm swooning at how cute your chibi is!

OMG
I CAN'T BELIEVE I DIDN'T SHADE THE EYE!
aahhhh, I feel so stupid xDD
Thank you for pointing that out! ;v;
I really appreciate the advice + the compliments <3
 
OMG
I CAN'T BELIEVE I DIDN'T SHADE THE EYE!
aahhhh, I feel so stupid xDD
Thank you for pointing that out! ;v;
I really appreciate the advice + the compliments <3

ahh for sure!!!
I can't wait to see more of your art!!
 
Like Allycat said, the eye could use some shading to make it look A+ fabulicious

Only other thing I would recommend is not to shade with black! It makes the colors look duller and de-saturated. C:

This is my go-to tutorial for shading advice http://www.deviantart.com/art/Hair-shading-tutorial-320096168

Other than that it's so cute and you should totally make more *o*
 
Like Allycat said, the eye could use some shading to make it look A+ fabulicious

Only other thing I would recommend is not to shade with black! It makes the colors look duller and de-saturated. C:

This is my go-to tutorial for shading advice http://www.deviantart.com/art/Hair-shading-tutorial-320096168

Other than that it's so cute and you should totally make more *o*

Thank you soooo much! The hair tutorial was really helpful. You guys rock. ;o; <3
 
i don't recommend using bright colours like that as your base. as you've stated they really strain your eyes, if you wanna use a bright colour go for something that's still easier to look at, like a pale lime green or something. like stay away from default ms paint colours all together and play around with the hues of other colours.

and like lemon pop said, don't ever shade with black. use colours that are closer together on the colour wheel or that compliment each other to shade/highlight.

your lines also seem a bit shakey on some parts, mostly the chin area.

i'd also suggest making the hair look more hair-like if that's what you're going for. maybe use a darker pale shade of red for hair strands like so: http://puu.sh/gvpnw/7212396719.jpg
 
Okay this is gonna sound racist but it refers to a shade of color, not a race.

Stay away from black while drawing at all times. Somethings it's necessary, but never use black to outline.
Blakc lines can make a picture look rom primo to deemo.
See below:

Also here's some help with eye shading!
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Also about how black lines work and why they are so mean on pictures:
Aight kinda proud of this. I like it:
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THEN BLACK LINES WHY
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;v;
I don't know if that'll help, but!??
 
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YO! You're art is super kawaii hehe
as everyone said, it's better to used coloured lineart hehe i really like ikr, so i use ikr's tut most of the time, http://fav.me/d5pmydx
 
Okay so I did another drawing
The eyes look waaay better imo thanks to you guyssss <33
But I'm really mad at myself because I drew them really big on accident, and they took up most of the pic :U
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Still need to work on the hair... Dx
Okay this is gonna sound racist but it refers to a shade of color, not a race.

Stay away from black while drawing at all times. Somethings it's necessary, but never use black to outline.
Blakc lines can make a picture look rom primo to deemo.
See below:

Also here's some help with eye shading!
m50erkX.png



Also about how black lines work and why they are so mean on pictures:
Aight kinda proud of this. I like it:
9kqwmQf.png


THEN BLACK LINES WHY
JfaNu3I.png


;v;
I don't know if that'll help, but!??

I think the black lines are a preference kinda thing. IMO your drawing looks just as amazing with black lines, as it does without. > v <
 
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Oh golly- I'm not one to give out art tips especially on coloring while I'm sick and dying but I'M BORED SO- HERE IT GOES A LONG EXPLANATION:

Eyes: Now, this may be just my bias since I dislike neon colors ESPECIALLY green- but I feel just putting the neon color by itself is very straining on the eyes. Now, if you happen to like the neon color I suppose you could continue to use it so long as you throw some shading in there to direct from the bright color itself like so-

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However- even that small bit of shading still has it looking quite bright.

There are tons of ways to shade eyes though! But since I only know my style- I'll try my best to utilize it and show how I'd dilute it a bit. qvq;;


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I bring down the opacity of the green-layer just a tad, throw some white shine on, a darker green for detail and a pupil. However, it still looks a bit bright. Though not quite as blinding. I tend to think detail distracts from the brightness a bit- however if it still is too bright you can always blend more dark colors in! I don't use a lot of shading on the eyes though 'cus I'm a weenie. orz;; I try to avoid neon as much as possible and dilute it if at all possible. Don't be afraid to throw more cute details in those eyes! Like hearts or shine, etc. Just be sure to no go over-board and clutter the eye too much.

Black Lines on Eyes: Okaaay so- I struggled with black lines for a long LONG time and am still trying to get over the darn things. Now, a lot of styles make very good use of them but it can be hard depending on your style and know-how. In fact, I just recently started coloring the lines on my eyes. orz;;;;;

Now, note the difference between the black lines on the eyes and when they are a dark brown:


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Makes a bit of a difference, right? Just looks a bit more pleasing to the eyes. Now- what about other colors? Dark green maybe?

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Not bad. Dark maroon/purple?

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Kinda funky- but not terrible. It's really all about playing with the colors and seeing what looks good. I tend to stick with dark brown and lower the opacity as I see fit. However- black doesn't always look bad either! It kind of varies. See the difference between a black outlined eye and a brown one:

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While neither look particularly bad- the black is just a bit more in your face while the brown tends to blend better.
OH! And to make it blend a bit more- take the skin tone and airbrush it onto the ends of your eye-lashes, blend, and lower the opacity.

Hair Coloring: as Lemon Pop said- NEVER shade with black! Not even when coloring something that is portrayed as black. It's recommended to use a dark blue or something of the sort. It makes the whole drawing look off and a tad odd. So- let me try to show how my dumb butt can help with this even though I'm a coloring noob. Let's start with the base color:

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Not much to say here except for make sure it's a nice medium between the dark shading you'll use and the light shine. //shrugs
Now, for shading I usually start with the base color- move it a smidge darker and move it a bit into the next blending color like so:

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Now, which way you go and how far on the last step is up to you and the color your using. If I were to use a light blue I'd probably take the color swatch down a bit further and more into the dark blue area of the color wheel. (as you can see from some of my pre-made swatches ahuhu)

So, let me just do the basic shading.


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So- since this was a sketch and I didn't take the time to throw all the proper hair lines in this will be kinda hard BUT- I'll try. Just plop that shading in around any hair lines and where any natural shading would go. I may have to add a few more hair lines. And as you can tell- I darkened the shading by a bit as it wasn't dark enough. Don't be afraid to change the shading if at any point it looks off to you!

Now I'm going to take that same color, and on a different layer I'm going to airbrush it into spots where i feel shading/darkness might fit and hit the hair to give it a smidge of dimension. Don't be afraid to play with the opacity either! Sometimes the color may be too dark, I almost always lower it to about 75%.

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Now, for some shine. There are tons of ways to do this and tons of shapes to use- but I tend to just do either a white or lighter color of the original streak across the hair, then just erase and create some random lines and lower the opacity a tad. Just play with it until it looks right.

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I'm leaning towards the circles so I'll stick with that for now. Not done yet though! Now I tend to take the skin color and airbrush it on around the hair surrounding the face and blend it a bit.
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Why do this? Because it helps the face stand out and adds a bit of brightness~ not done though! You have to lower the opacity so it just barely shows through. About 45-50% is pretty good!
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Black Lines: I struggle with black lines- always have and still am. My best advice- try to avoid them unless you can make them look good. Some people color all the lines EXCEPT for the very outer ones which gives it a nice effect. Can't find any examples right now but they're out there! So- once you have all of your stuff shaded, you're ready to mess with your lines!
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Let's start with the skin. Now, the trick is to find a nice medium so the lines aren't too light that you can barely see them nor too dark that they are blunt. I usually take the color I shaded with and tweak it a bit darker until I find a good color.

Too light.
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Too dark.
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Pretty good!
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Mind you- these would look way better if I actually lined them, but I'm sick and lazy so bah. So now that the skin is done- on to the hair! Same basic concept really. WAMBAM

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Now for a finishing touch I usually just make a new layer, swipe some white where the light hits and a dark color of your choice where the shade would hit and blend like so:
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And lower that opacity to around 10. You can totally skip this step- I just do it for fun. I go into Photoshop and mess with the lighting a bit there too- so blah. SO WAMBAM YOURE DONE

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In am the worst tutorial maker and also a noob colorist who is p sick and can hardly think straight so take what I say with a grain of salt. I'm a simplistic coloring person and envy those who take the time to go into great detail. I'm not one of those people though. orz Your cheebs are super cute though!

EDITT: laffs because i skipped an entire shading step of my own coloring technique AhAHimafailure i shouldnt be giving lessons when im sick i forgot how i color

THIS is how it would look normally. Here are the steps I skipped and messed up.

While shading the hair with the airbrush tool- do a streak across the hair and then erase where the streak meets any lines. Now, create dips in what is left of the streak and blend a bit so the streak blends in. Lower the opacity as you see fit. Then put the shine where you want- I dumbly forgot I changed how I shine and thought I was still doing the streak technique- when in fact I just put dots in the airbrushed streak. hhhhimsosorry

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