new style

[Money Hunter]

critque and opinions please, i dont care whether it's 'this sucks' or 'this sucks but you can improve by...' I just want to know what ppl think of it o3o

 

[toastia]

the lips and the mouth look a bit too out of proportion with the head shape, and it makes it look rather sloppy.

the hair looks kinda restricted and straight as opposed to natural

but it's better than the time i tried a new style XD

 

[Money Hunter]

the lips and the mouth look a bit too out of proportion with the head shape, and it makes it look rather sloppy.

the hair looks kinda restricted and straight as opposed to natural

but it's better than the time i tried a new style XD

by lips out of proportion do you mean they're too big or too small?

 

[toastia]

by lips out of proportion do you mean they're too big or too small?

much too big for the face

 

[Money Hunter]

much too big for the face

Okay, thank you! I also found the hair too be a bit weird, I should experiment a bit more with that c:

 

[chewies]

It reminds me of toon link and that style.
//also i can't remember any of your "old" style off the top of my head to compare it to

I think the face as a whole (like the eyes/lips/mouth) are a little too low on the head. (do you see what i mean or does it like need more explaining). It might be because of the bangs, like the way you've drawn them is with the eyes below the bangs, but if you think about if someone had bangs their bangs usually cover the eyes? or maybe not, i guess some people's bangs don't cover their eyes.

If you are going for a like, chibi style I think you're on the right track.

 

[Money Hunter]

It reminds me of toon link and that style.
//also i can't remember any of your "old" style off the top of my head to compare it to

I think the face as a whole (like the eyes/lips/mouth) are a little too low on the head. (do you see what i mean or does it like need more explaining). It might be because of the bangs, like the way you've drawn them is with the eyes below the bangs, but if you think about if someone had bangs their bangs usually cover the eyes? or maybe not, i guess some people's bangs don't cover their eyes.

If you are going for a like, chibi style I think you're on the right track.

I don't like it when the bangs cover the eyes >:x thats why lol
I guess I'm going for a kinda chibi style idk I'm just trying new stuff out and I kinda liked this so I wanted to know what others thought about it o3o