I've, surprisingly, never seen a story displayed here. I love writing and reading and would like to post a story I have written. It is unfinished, and I will post chapters in separate posts throughout the thread, so please check up c: I hope you enjoy it. I am not the best so bare with c:
Summary: A story about the villagers of Ohana and how they all settled in.
The CAST:
Fauna; The beautiful, the intelligent, the harmonious, the odd one, the main character
O'hare; The player, the friend
Lolly; The best friend of Fauna
Mira: The Superhero
Diana; Sister of Fauna, the posh one
Shep; The folk musician
Shari; The exotic one.
Merengue; Ohana's baker, chef, and the one to go to for a sweet treat
Molly; The bookworm and best friend of Merengue, Lolly, and Fauna
Bill; The gym duck, Molly's secret admirer...
Chapter I
Fauna's PoV
Just as the radiant rays of the sun beam through the gap in the curtains, I awaken to chirping birds and clear skies.
It was a normal day in my hometown. I woke up just knowing that it was time to visit the forest area.
As I crept downstairs, the fumes of fresh toast and jam filled the air as Mother deer prepared breakfast.
"Good Morning, Mother!" I greeted, wrapping my scarf around my neck as the November chills ran up my spine.
"Now, just where are you going, Fauna?" Mother wondered in her soft voice.
"I was just thinking that Fiona could do with some apple sauce."
There was an old apple tree at the start of the forest, but the apples were fresh and juicy. Fiona was my younger sister, who had no teeth for chewing the apple, but the large mouth for eating the apple sauce.
"Well, I have some rather important news for you." Mother announced, handing me a formal slip of paper.
It was an advertisement for a dainty looking town. The villagers seemed so joyful, and the paper had a newspaper attachment:
'Mayor Avalon takes office in Ohana, promising to turn the town upside down', the title read.
"It's about time you went somewhere new."
A worried expression spread across my face, and poor little Fiona's too. She was quite bright for such a young deer, and seemed to know exactly what was happening.
I did trek into the forest one last time. Images flashed through my mind; I couldn't imagine life without my family and friends, but I couldn't judge. I wasn't even there yet.
"Wait, you're leaving?" Cried both Molly and Zell, my dearest childhood friends.
Tears rolled down my cheeks. "I'm afraid so."
I hugged both of them one last time, regretting saying goodbye.
"You are the best friends anyone could ever have." I told them.
They promised to write to me, and I promised to write to them.
I picked some juicy apples from the ancient tree for my train journey, and as a kind gift to my new fellows.
"Promise you'll write to me, Mother?" I asked.
"But of course!" She smiled, tears rolling down both our cheeks.
With my suitcase in one hand, apples in the other, I courageously stepped on the train, waving goodbye to my family, friends, and my childhood.
Summary: A story about the villagers of Ohana and how they all settled in.
The CAST:
Fauna; The beautiful, the intelligent, the harmonious, the odd one, the main character
O'hare; The player, the friend
Lolly; The best friend of Fauna
Mira: The Superhero
Diana; Sister of Fauna, the posh one
Shep; The folk musician
Shari; The exotic one.
Merengue; Ohana's baker, chef, and the one to go to for a sweet treat
Molly; The bookworm and best friend of Merengue, Lolly, and Fauna
Bill; The gym duck, Molly's secret admirer...
Chapter I
Fauna's PoV
Just as the radiant rays of the sun beam through the gap in the curtains, I awaken to chirping birds and clear skies.
It was a normal day in my hometown. I woke up just knowing that it was time to visit the forest area.
As I crept downstairs, the fumes of fresh toast and jam filled the air as Mother deer prepared breakfast.
"Good Morning, Mother!" I greeted, wrapping my scarf around my neck as the November chills ran up my spine.
"Now, just where are you going, Fauna?" Mother wondered in her soft voice.
"I was just thinking that Fiona could do with some apple sauce."
There was an old apple tree at the start of the forest, but the apples were fresh and juicy. Fiona was my younger sister, who had no teeth for chewing the apple, but the large mouth for eating the apple sauce.
"Well, I have some rather important news for you." Mother announced, handing me a formal slip of paper.
It was an advertisement for a dainty looking town. The villagers seemed so joyful, and the paper had a newspaper attachment:
'Mayor Avalon takes office in Ohana, promising to turn the town upside down', the title read.
"It's about time you went somewhere new."
A worried expression spread across my face, and poor little Fiona's too. She was quite bright for such a young deer, and seemed to know exactly what was happening.
I did trek into the forest one last time. Images flashed through my mind; I couldn't imagine life without my family and friends, but I couldn't judge. I wasn't even there yet.
"Wait, you're leaving?" Cried both Molly and Zell, my dearest childhood friends.
Tears rolled down my cheeks. "I'm afraid so."
I hugged both of them one last time, regretting saying goodbye.
"You are the best friends anyone could ever have." I told them.
They promised to write to me, and I promised to write to them.
I picked some juicy apples from the ancient tree for my train journey, and as a kind gift to my new fellows.
"Promise you'll write to me, Mother?" I asked.
"But of course!" She smiled, tears rolling down both our cheeks.
With my suitcase in one hand, apples in the other, I courageously stepped on the train, waving goodbye to my family, friends, and my childhood.
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P.S. Lolly & Fauna are SO adorable! They're besties in my town as well :3
