Opinions and ways to improve?

[Wholockian]

So, I finally drew a piece that I'm actually kinda proud of myself for. I would like some opinions, and ways to improve on it
(Deathstroke)
Please ignore the green dots. Someone I knew was trying to be funny


I also don't know what is going on with my iPad. It likes to rotate everything

 

[Mercedes]

Not using notebook paper

But everything looks really good beside the lined paper

 

[Wholockian]

Not using notebook paper

But everything looks really good beside the lined paper

Aha. thank you ^w^ Yeah... That's a good idea. thank you

 

[Wholockian]

Bump

 

[00ToxicLove00]

So far it look good. Great Job.

 

[Wholockian]

So far it look good. Great Job.

Thanks so much ^w^ Bump!

 

[Money Hunter]

Looks good ^-^

 

[Wholockian]

Looks good ^-^

Thank you <3