Pencil IRL Headshot Sketch w/ Pastel Chalk! want opinions../CLOSED!

[Bunnilla]

So I made a Pencil Headshot Sketch of my OC Yume, sorry I couldn't scan with printer cause I'm too lazy, so I took a regular picture. If you want one done, I'm only going to 1 freebie, I will definitely scan that one lol leave me a ref and a brief description of the character <3
I am not doing males, at most, feminine males. The eyes will be colored with pastel chalk, unless you want it pencil, and maybe some detail depending on the character.

https://toyhou.se/472052.yume

Spoiler: Pencil Sketch

I took out the black pupil cause I felt it looked weird. So probs only coloring in with a color and thats it. Also changed the smile and made it look more surpised-ish, the smile looked a bit weird too lmao. ****NOW it has the right updated image

Don't blame me that the eyes are uneven or something, this isn't digital where I can copy and paste, then flip the eye lmao
Let me know what you think, first time using professional drawing paper. :3

 

[Xara]

ooo that looks beautiful <3 i love her eyes tbh, and her hair looks amazing



as for the freebie thing, idk if you'd be willing to do one of my mayor, but just in case:

Spoiler: refs

description: Emily is a sophisticated, graceful girl who knows how to be fierce and commanding when she needs to be. while she may look sweet and kind, she knows how to take control of any situation and is exceptionally independent. she'd rather be alone than with anybody, and will do anything to ensure that her reputation stays the way it is. she takes crap from no one, and will not hesitate to chew you out if you challenge her.


thanks in advance, and once again, your art looks fantastic c:

 

[~Mae~]

Very cute!!

 

[namiieco]

aaaa it look amazing <3
hope you consider mine { x }
good luck to everyone else!

 

[himeki]

ooooo shaymin that looks awesome!
i'd love it if you could do [evelyn!]

 

[piichinu]

here's my character if youre interested https://toyhou.se/480173.hiyori

 

[FleuraBelle]

That looks so good and pretty! I love how you colored in her eyes!

Would perhaps like to try Mimi?

 

[Bunnilla]

I'm liking all of these so far, so hard to pick x.x also whoever I pick I can gurantee I'll finish it by Sunday, but not sure what day because of school and junk

 

[Pearls]

It looks really good :0
Maybe consider her? c:

 

[Chicha]

Very cute! My only critique is that her head looks a bit off. I think it may be because her bangs and eyes are so close to the top of her head so the anatomy looks unbalanced. I would keep that in mind for future art. ^^;

 

[Bunnilla]

Very cute! My only critique is that her head looks a bit off. I think it may be because her bangs and eyes are so close to the top of her head so the anatomy looks unbalanced. I would keep that in mind for future art. ^^;

I tried lmao its too late for me to erase eyes with chalk. I wanted to, but it would be more messy. If it was digital I could fix it very easily

 

[Chicha]

I tried lmao its too late for me to erase eyes with chalk. I wanted to, but it would be more messy. If it was digital I could fix it very easily

I understand, that's the tricky part of going traditional. =v=

 

[Bunnilla]

CLOSED! Will pick one from above that I like won't say which one thou I'll try to finish it within this week.

 

[Emrod333]

love your style!

 

[Bunnilla]

love your style!

ty! by the time of Christmas, will have a Wacom tablet, and if people like it might do some headshots <3 totally unmessy and even eyes lol