Please dream of my town! :)x

[AnimalLeila]

I want you guys to see my town and give me tips on how to improve!

1.Perfect cherry trees are actually growing!
2.I need more flowers!

DREAM ADDRESS: 7700-2636-3358
TOWN: Cornwall.

Thanks!

 

[rivulet]

I'll visit your dream town once I'm done with a few trades!

 

[AnimalLeila]

I'll visit your dream town once I'm done with a few trades!

Thankyou!

 

[StarryACNL]

I'll go now.
Comments:
Path leading up to mario cut-out board looks a bit weird as there is no side to it unlike the proper path
Like the little bamboo area (south of plaza)
Like the orange and apple orchard
Like the square of tree's
Maybe work on putting same flowers and flower breeds together in one area!
Path around the campsite has no edge to it (probably because of space!)
Like the lemon tree arrangement
In some places it looks a little cramped (also gives off a cozy theme though)
Where O'hares house is path isn't finished
Jealous you've got Savannah and Victoria

It's a very nice town!!
The south feels very cozy and there are some nice arrangements of flowers and tree!!
Hope this helps!!
Rate your 8/10 Mine is only 6/10

 

[TheCreeperHugz]

I'll visit in a minute, I have buisness with Gracie

 

[rivulet]

Your town is so cute omg <33

I am in love with the path. And the double rainbow is an awesome touch. It makes your town more magical.

All I suggest is to water your flowers x3

 

[Paint]

I love the flowers and the trees
Paths need a little work, though.

 

[AnimalLeila]

I'll go now.
Comments:
Path leading up to mario cut-out board looks a bit weird as there is no side to it unlike the proper path
Like the little bamboo area (south of plaza)
Like the orange and apple orchard
Like the square of tree's
Maybe work on putting same flowers and flower breeds together in one area!
Path around the campsite has no edge to it (probably because of space!)
Like the lemon tree arrangement
In some places it looks a little cramped (also gives off a cozy theme though)
Where O'hares house is path isn't finished
Jealous you've got Savannah and Victoria

It's a very nice town!!
The south feels very cozy and there are some nice arrangements of flowers and tree!!
Hope this helps!!
Rate your 8/10 Mine is only 6/10

Thanks! I need the single boarders for my path so I will look for some! Victoria was a starter resident and savannah moved in later!

- - - Post Merge - - -

Thank you for all your feedback! I am improving my town bit by bit! You all helped out a lot!

 

[fl0ra]

checking it out right now. c:

 

[AnimalLeila]

checking it out right now. c:

Thanks!

 

[fl0ra]

cute town c: i liked the paths and the placement of pwps! i also enjoyed seeing o'hare and marilyn monroe cough i mean monique! she was my favorite in the GC version and I was debating whether or not i should get her for my ACNL town. but seeing that i already have 2 (going to be 3 if i get tom soon), i decided not to. sigh she's amazing and i had some fond memories of her in my town, you're lucky to have her! the only thing that needs improvement is to water some of your flowers, which i can see that you have already done and to add more of them! like you said. that's all! ^^

i'm probably going to start a thread like this, i need people to review my town as well!

 

[ForgottenT]

I?ll visit when I finally get a camper that I?m looking for, around 15 hours into it so far and still none of the ones I?m looking for have showed up ._.

 

[AnimalLeila]

cute town c: i liked the paths and the placement of pwps! i also enjoyed seeing o'hare and marilyn monroe cough i mean monique! she was my favorite in the GC version and I was debating whether or not i should get her for my ACNL town. but seeing that i already have 2 (going to be 3 if i get tom soon), i decided not to. sigh she's amazing and i had some fond memories of her in my town, you're lucky to have her! the only thing that needs improvement is to water some of your flowers, which i can see that you have already done and to add more of them! like you said. that's all! ^^

i'm probably going to start a thread like this, i need people to review my town as well!

Thankyou! I recently got a Golden Watering Can for 15 dayd perfect town so plants will be watered more!

 

[AnimalLeila]

Bump! What PWPs would look nice in my town?

 

[LillyKay]

I loved it.
The paths are very solid and very well connected to the projects, homes and bridges.

All of the positive and constructive feedback has been given by Mayor Amy (StarryACNL) above. I will therefore not list it again. Only thing is that check Amykins again - page 2. The single edged tile is now completed and will finish your town off so beautifully .

EDITS: Okay, just seen your bump

Something fairy - perhaps bench in front of Roxy's house and next to Monique's house will be good.

 

[AnimalLeila]

Thank you! I am currently looking for the design to match it!