Poem: Stupid

[jesughs]

I made this poem a few days ago, and I've been wanting to get some feedback on it. So if you guys could post your thoughts about it that would be great. Anyways, here it is. It's called Stupid.

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Stupid
Stupid is what they call me
They think it?s my second name
It?s just a joke
That?s what they say
They?re laughing
Everyone?s laughing
I?m laughing
But inside I?m crying

Tears
Invisible tears stream down my cheeks
My eyes are two raging waterfalls
No one sees the tears but me
I hide them from behind my happy disguise
They believe it
Everyone believes it
I believe it
I wish that I really did

Friends
They?re supposed to be my friends
And I foolishly think that they are
But their joking words slice deep into me
Leaving bleeding wounds from their sharp tongues
They hurt me
Everyone hurts me
I hurt me
That part is the truth

Idiot
I?m not an idiot
I?d scream it from rooftops if I could
Instead I try to tell them lightly
That I?m smart, just like them
They?re silent
Everyone?s silent
I?m silent
What will they say?

Stitches
They?re in stitches
Laughing at the stupid girl
They chuckle, they giggle, they snicker
Forcing me to join along
They?re dying
Everyone?s dying
I?m dying
I wish I really was

 

[Hey Listen!]

Deeep stuff man. Iss niice

 

[Kaiaa]

Very nicely written, Air. I don't know if your life events gave you the inspiration to write this but if it did, life gets better. There comes a time when you'll realize it doesn't matter what everyone else thinks.

 

[indigoXdaisy]

That's really great. I can relate.

 

[easpa]

Good job. Very nicely written! c: