Possibly the best scratch sprite I have ever made

[[Nook]]

Psyoshka
The Nesting Doll Pokemon
Psychic/Normal

This Pokemon was created when an empty nesting doll was possessed by souls trapped in it. It uses telekinesis to move things and itself around and to attack. It is said that the spirits will consume anything that gets in its body.

And if you're wondering, the name is from "Psychic" and "Matryoshka".

Rate on a scale of 1-10, please.

 

[Elliot]

5. :]

 

[[Nook]]

5. :]

Oh bawww.

Reason?
Oh and, um, from now on, give me reason with your reason, so I can benefit from it.

 

[Elliot]

,Nov 29 2010, 08:46:48 PM]

5. :]

Oh bawww.

Reason?
Oh and, um, from now on, give me reason with your reason, so I can benefit from it.

Kinda too bright at the left hand of the side, Makes it as if he was pale. The eyes need a big more fixing, (The eyes really don't look like pokemon eyes. ) Mouth could improve. I just had one other thing, then i forgot it. None of the less, it was between a 5-7.

 

[Psychonaut]

that's actually a nice idea for a pokemon.

good work

 

[[Nook]]

,Nov 29 2010, 08:46:48 PM]

5. :]

Oh bawww.

Reason?
Oh and, um, from now on, give me reason with your reason, so I can benefit from it.

Kinda too bright at the left hand of the side, Makes it as if he was pale. The eyes need a big more fixing, (The eyes really don't look like pokemon eyes. ) Mouth could improve. I just had one other thing, then i forgot it. None of the less, it was between a 5-7.

The eyes and mouth, I agree.
I guess he looks a little pale.

You're right.

 

[[Nook]]

Bump.

 

[Jake]

It looks like a babushka doll

 

[[Nook]]

It looks like a babushka doll

It is.

 

[Bacon Boy]

The face bothers me. It looks unPok

 

[Jake]

,Nov 29 2010, 11:22:37 PM]

It looks like a babushka doll

It is.

I know

 

[[Nook]]

,Nov 29 2010, 11:22:37 PM]

It looks like a babushka doll

It is.

I know

Good.

 

[Ciaran]

2.
It's just bad.

 

[Ron Ronaldo]

The body looks alright, but the face doesn't look very pokemon-esque.

Still, it's a cool idea =]

 

[KoolKitteh]

3.
Its.... Meh!

 

[Josh]

It's an okay sprite, It just doesn't look like a pokemon.
The face needs a better color/colour or needs color/colour overall, A color/colour that goes with the pokemon like yellow or orange (not too bright). The eyes are terrible just a triangle with an outline and the mouth is better, Just the shapes bother me. Also the head isn't aligned with the body as the face tilts a bit while the body is just straight. Make the face look straight.

6/10. I like to color/colours but needs better shadowing (Middle triangle) and above ^

Deuces.

 

[SilentHopes]

6.

Too bright on the one side, and I think the name could be better.

 

[D1llon]

5/10
a lot better than your previous ones, and a good idea for pokemon.

 

[Gnome]

that's actually a nice idea for a pokemon.

good work

too bad it's basically claydol & coffin guy mixed.