Price check + critique?
- Thread starter PeeBraiin
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That Zephyr Guy
crouton.net
Id personally pay around 100-200 tbt for this.
Be careful with using thick lines like that, it can look very good, but it looks a little sloppy since you can see where your pen sensitivity freaks out a bit (left armpit, left shoulder).
The coloring on the hair looks really nice. With a little more practice you could make the hair look absolutely amazing. One thing I'd change though is the shading on the hair around the sides of her face. Since it's more in the back and underneath other hair, the shading here would be much broader - kind of like the entirety of that area is in a shadow.
Aside from that I'd say to work on your anatomy a little. I know the anatomy on this isn't bad at all (because it isn't), but I notice you use the same pose very frequently and that's not really good for improvement. Maybe try some pose generators and see what sort of fun stuff you can make from that?
Be careful with using thick lines like that, it can look very good, but it looks a little sloppy since you can see where your pen sensitivity freaks out a bit (left armpit, left shoulder).
The coloring on the hair looks really nice. With a little more practice you could make the hair look absolutely amazing. One thing I'd change though is the shading on the hair around the sides of her face. Since it's more in the back and underneath other hair, the shading here would be much broader - kind of like the entirety of that area is in a shadow.
Aside from that I'd say to work on your anatomy a little. I know the anatomy on this isn't bad at all (because it isn't), but I notice you use the same pose very frequently and that's not really good for improvement. Maybe try some pose generators and see what sort of fun stuff you can make from that?
I agree with the above posters but one more thing is that I'd suggest cleaning up any gaps before selling - a lot of parts where the colouring goes beyond the line or where there's a gap where colour should be makes it seem rushed. It's fine if it's a sketch, but best to keep everything clean and precise for selling.
Yeah, these are just quick sketches to see what people in think if anything is wonky so that I can easily go back and fix it
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I'd say about 50TBT?
