Price/critique my art!

[Locket]

I did pocky's mayor. I don't know why it's sideways though.

Please price it and critique it

 

[biibii]

don't think this is worth btb yet

the lineart looks really shaky and not good
anatomy is not too good
delete pencil sketch after u line it

also broke my neck trying to look at it

 

[Locket]

don't think this is worth btb yet

the lineart looks really shaky and not good
anatomy is not too good
delete pencil sketch after u line it

also broke my neck trying to look at it

I did erase the pencil. I don't know what happened.

And I can't help that it's sideways, it uploaded that way.

 

[Sugilite]

0 tbt
You need to practice more boo

 

[spookycipher]

i would recommend practicing, it makes perfect!!

 

[Llust]

practice is all you can do to improve and a lot of it

specific suggestions - & sorry if any of it seems harsh, this is just constructive criticism
- the coloring seems like barely any effort was put into it, i suggest coloring in more lightly and try coloring it the whole thing i.e. the skirt. coloring lightly makes shading/layers show better
- take your time throughout the whole drawing, it'll look so much better if you do
- the anatomy needs work (ex: the legs and thighs should curve inwards towards the knee caps and the elbows need more definition
- i recommend working on the fingers, dont make them too close to the wrist bc then it'll just look like there's no actual hand there
- im assuming the pink thing is a scarf. if it is, have it rest on the shoulders more and make it look like theres some hanging off the back - at least that's how i would do it
- the line art should be cleaner imo and more 'straight'

 

[Locket]

practice is all you can do to improve and a lot of it

specific suggestions - & sorry if any of it seems harsh, this is just constructive criticism
- the coloring seems like barely any effort was put into it, i suggest coloring in more lightly and try coloring it the whole thing i.e. the skirt. coloring lightly makes shading/layers show better
- take your time throughout the whole drawing, it'll look so much better if you do
- the anatomy needs work (ex: the legs and thighs should curve inwards towards the knee caps and the elbows need more definition
- i recommend working on the fingers, dont make them too close to the wrist bc then it'll just look like there's no actual hand there
- im assuming the pink thing is a scarf. if it is, have it rest on the shoulders more and make it look like theres some hanging off the back - at least that's how i would do it
- the line art should be cleaner imo and more 'straight'

That wasn't harsh compared to woozie and Sugilite's responses

 

[EtchaSketch]

Hey, I agree that it might have been better that they reply a bit less harsh, but you can't call them out on that because you asked for it, and never said to not be harsh. Honestly, sometimes, harsh works better for improvement.

Keep practicing and you'll get better.