Random Sprite Blob(s)

[Grawr]

Well, thanks to Ultra's help, I've managed to create a sprite from scratch. I really don't know what he is...its like a blob...but it resembles a fish, sorta...slightly...

Anyway, here he is:

How's it look for a begginer-spriter and my first one ever made from scratch?
I know I need to work on my shading a lot...I keep using shades too close to the original color. >.<

 

[Nate]

Better than my first scratch. I think the shading's off, and there should be some on the thing sticking out of it's head. Also, make the outline something other than solid black, maybe like a dark orange, for the shaded areas, and lighter for areas w/o it.

 

[UltraByte]

Better than my first scratch. I think the shading's off, and there should be some on the thing sticking out of it's head. Also, make the outline something other than solid black, maybe like a dark orange, for the shaded areas, and lighter for areas w/o it.

Exactly what I was going to say.

Gengar, where exactly was your light coming from?

 

[Grawr]

Better than my first scratch. I think the shading's off, and there should be some on the thing sticking out of it's head. Also, make the outline something other than solid black, maybe like a dark orange, for the shaded areas, and lighter for areas w/o it.

Exactly what I was going to say.

Gengar, where exactly was your light coming from?

>_<

Supposedly the top, a little over to the side with the thing sticking out of his head...



*goes to re-do*

 

[UltraByte]

Better than my first scratch. I think the shading's off, and there should be some on the thing sticking out of it's head. Also, make the outline something other than solid black, maybe like a dark orange, for the shaded areas, and lighter for areas w/o it.

Exactly what I was going to say.

Gengar, where exactly was your light coming from?

>_<

Supposedly the top, a little over to the side with the thing sticking out of his head...



*goes to re-do*

Ah, I see. If the light's coming from there, why is the right side of the fish thingy shaded?

 

[Grawr]

Better than my first scratch. I think the shading's off, and there should be some on the thing sticking out of it's head. Also, make the outline something other than solid black, maybe like a dark orange, for the shaded areas, and lighter for areas w/o it.

Exactly what I was going to say.

Gengar, where exactly was your light coming from?

>_<

Supposedly the top, a little over to the side with the thing sticking out of his head...



*goes to re-do*

Ah, I see. If the light's coming from there, why is the right side of the fish thingy shaded?

:wacko: :wacko: :wacko:

*goes to re-do immediatly*

 

[UltraByte]

lol, sometimes I do that.

 

[Grawr]

Okay everyone, I revised him. The one on the front page is the revised one.

The outlines are no longer solid black, and the shading on his right side is...well, gone.

 

[UltraByte]

It looks pretty good now for a first scratch sprite.

 

[Grawr]

It looks pretty good now for a first scratch sprite.

=D


I'm working on a second one...

I ended up drawing like 15 of these little fish/blob guys. (One's like a shark/whale, though. )

 

[Grawr]

Updated teh first post with a new one...

=D

 

[UltraByte]

It's good, but I think the shading on your original was better.

 

[Grawr]

*is working on new one already*

Should I show you all the picture of these fish/blob things? I could sketch 'em all up in paint real quick so you know what the sprites are supposed to look like...

 

[UltraByte]

Nah, surprise us.

 

[Grawr]

Nah, surprise us.

Very well.




The one I'm working on is pretty insane (and giant), so it's gonna take a while...

 

[UltraByte]

lol

Once you start getting the hang of it, spriting one sprite may take only minutes.

 

[dragonflamez]

Bah. I don't like spriting much.