Some Pointless Poems-taking requests

SolaireOfAstora

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Taking poem requests, can be as simple and casual as free verse, or as structured and formal as a Shakespearean Sonnet. I can do weird rhyme schemes and pretty much any topic!

Doing first 3 requests free. After that, it'll be 10 tbt a poem, or 14 for a sonnet (b/c there is 14 lines! And they're difficult! aka I don't like 'em)

Example:

You say the world is against you
You act like nothing is ever right
Your life is in ruins,
Your heart is aching
Lost all hope
You are in complete despair
Breaking down
Time flows by,
Leaving you helpless
You act like the world is against you
When really,
It?s you against yourself

I?m Not Asleep

Struggling to stay awake,
On this dark night
My world begins to quake

I fear that I?m not alone
They?re coming for me
From the unknown

They come in one by one
Now it?s time,
It has begun

They have come to seal my fate
I?m in this terrible nightmare
As they drag me to their fiery gate

I watch myself burn
Dying inside,
For freedom, I yearn

To see myself from other eyes,
To watch myself scream,
I only hear their deafening cries

I?m in my worst nightmare
I know it?s all over,
When I see that stone-cold glare

Rising is the feeling of fear,
Dancing shadows on the walls
Watching the light disappear

I see a menacing shape
It is then that I grasp it,
There is no escape

I hear the sound I dread
The silence being broken,
The blood being bled

I am trapped in this horrible dream
When they call my name
In an ear-splitting scream

I know now it is the end,
I?m being taken apart
By this heartless fiend

I feel the life being taken away
As I watch myself
Be led astray

Something is wrong
Something inside
When your dreams and reality begin to collide

This place where I am, devilishly dreary
I know I?m letting go
As I feel my limbs grow weary

What my dreams have become,
No man shall know,
Only that this fear must be overcome

My dreams have become my worst disguise
Keeping me from reality,
Known as the cave where the demon lies

I try to wake from this darkness so deep
Except when I realize,
I?m not asleep

Will post a sonnet a tomorrow! Enjoy :)
 
OK ... Well, you had me at Shakespeare ❤️ ... But I would like silly ... Could you do one about my Weiner dog Lulu? ... Short verse or sonnet ... Looking forward to it if you can :rolleyes:
 
OK ... Well, you had me at Shakespeare ❤️ ... But I would like silly ... Could you do one about my Weiner dog Lulu? ... Short verse or sonnet ... Looking forward to it if you can :rolleyes:

Haha! I'll try! :) Thanks, Shakespeare is GREAT! (Said the 14-year-old :p) (I'm not a normal 9th grader :p )
 
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