Sony - make.believe

[SilentHopes]

Version 1

Version 2

I think version 1 is better, and my parent agree.
By the way, TBT say happy birthday to my dad!

 

[muffun]

You can't even see part of the text on v2.

But it's okay I guess. Kind of bland.

 

[Jas0n]

The text and background are both really blurry, and the complete blackness on either side is boring. The text doesn't match the background at all either, when you're doing a sig where the text is the main focal point it needs to atleast somewhat resemble and blend with the background, otherwise they're 2 separate entities and completely boring to look at.

 

[kalinn]

I like it except the black kinda makes it plain and boring.
Maybe if there was more color and the black covered it a little less..

 

[Pear]

The first is better.

 

[Kyel]

#2 looks pretty nice, except for all the black space around it, you should cut out the middle that would look sick.

 

[NikoKing]

Most of it seems boring, it's very low quality (try sharpening more? :\), the 2nd version is bombarded with negative spacing (negative spacing is only good when it matches the depth of a signature), the 2nd version's focal recognition is pretty bad (you can't even see most of the logo), they're both somewhat boring to look at (I think I maybe nitpicking too much ).

Anyways, I suggest not doing logo based focals. They're just not fun and are very hard to do imo.