Hi what's up? I know this is for showing art or your creations but today I will show you something. In return for helping me.
I need your guys help for a story I'm currently making. I'll show what I'm talking about.
So far in my story I have reached half-way through chapter 2. Since I have finished chapter 1 I'll show it as my creation.
BEWARE: This chapter may be long for some people. I suggest if are under 13 you stop reading from here. But if are mature enough you're more than welcome to.
Chapter 1, Misty Darkness.
23 September 2025
Roxanne's POV:
Darkness surrounded me as I walked through the long hallway, I was just five. I was supposed to be napping, but I was thirsty, and I needed a glass of water.*
When I reached the kitchen door, screams occared, then a gun shot. Bang! A woman's bloody hand reached the hallway.
"Gross!" I jumped onto the ceiling, not wondering what just happened.
"Where are you Roxanne?" My father came to the hallway, with a knife in his right hand. Bloody and death-like.
My mother just got murdered by her father. Why would he do this? He eventually walked out of the house, cleaning himself to make sure nothing happened inside.
Then three men dressed in black suits and glasses walked in. I finally jumped onto the floor, stargazing at my dead mother.
"Mum, wake up, we've got visitors," I patted her mum's back. My mother didn't respond. "Mummy! Wake up! Please! Wake up!" I sobbed for ten minutes, and then noticed the blood on my hands. "Mummy's, dead?"
"Apparently so, we're so sorry for your loss," one of the men placed his hand on my shoulder. "I'm sorry to tell you this, but we must take you away now."
"Why?! I belong here!"
"You cannot live here on your own, child. We must take you with us," two of the men grabbed my arms.
"Wait! Can't I at least take my teddy with me?"
The men sighed, then made a decision. "You may take your teddy with you," they confirmed.
"Thank you," I ran to my bedroom to grab my teddy. It took at least ten minutes to find it. I looked everywhere for it, I gave up. Then suddenly I found a historical note, under my single bed. "Hmm?" I opened it, only to find a written message, and a golden jewel necklace. I was only five, however I was a tremendous reader for my age.
"Dear Roxanne,
Hi sweetie, if your reading this, your step-mother just recently died. Didn't she? Anyways I am not dead, so don't you worry. I'm just, busy. I need to tell you something, this may be depressing, but I'm a vampire. So are you, but you're half-human, that means you will grow until you're 18. I'll explain everything in ten years, okay?
Love you darling,
Your Real Mother Carlie."
Meanwhile:
"She's a strange one, isn't she?" Alex, one of the men questioned.
"Yes Alex, usually kids would love to be with us, because they have family issues," Carl answered, who is another one of the men.
"Roxanne's only five, and she doesn't have any family issues," Dan, the last man, explained clearly.
"How do you know that?" Carl and Alex asked.
**
"I know her real mother, we're good friends. Besides, I used to date her years ago. I also know her husband, I knew that guy was up to no good, I had never trusted that guy." Dan walked to my bedroom. "Roxanne? You in here?"He noticed the tears on my face.
"My mother, is, a," I collapsed on my bed. Falling into a deep sleep, wishing for my mum to be here, with me.
"Don't worry Roxanne, I'll be your new daddy, if that makes you feel better," Carl and Alex appeared in the room.
"What's taking you so long?" They questioned, peering over Dan's shoulder. "Is she okay?"
"It's okay, she's just stressed," Dan rose to his feet, turning around. "You know, I've been thinking that I should adopt her."
"Really? You sure you want to be a father?" Carl questioned Dan, certain if he is telling the truth.
"I'm sure, Carl, besides, she needs a real father. Who can protect her and take care of her," Dan picked up me and took me to their hover-car. "Roxanne, in ten years I'm going to tell you everything, just like your mother, okay?"
Alex and Carl walked to the van, closing the house door. With Dan placing me in the back seats.
"Dan, are you sure it's safe to adopt Roxanne, she's a." Alex paused, stepping into the drivers seat.
"We'll talk about it later okay?" Dan went in the back seats next to me. "Come on, we don't have all day."
Carl sat in the front passengers seat. Alex started driving, out of the town, out of the state, and out of the planet.
Space, it is so mysterious, there are thousands of galaxies, which planet are we going to? I am not certain, but I will find out. Eventually I will.
My mum was my hero, she is smart, gorgeous, and brave. She would calm me when things went wrong. She protects me, when trouble was ahead. We would bond, like any other mother-daughter.
Carlie's POV:
Blood-thristy, weak, and lonely. Just another vampire day for me. The reasons why I am blood-thirsty and weak are unimportant. I am lonely though because I miss my daughter, Roxanne.
I left her when she was two months old, she grew fast. She didn't know much though, so it was safe to. At first I felt happy, and free. But after a few months, I felt guilty and lost. I wanted her back in my life, but when I attempted to, her new parents threatened to kill me.
So now I am stuck waiting for her to read that message. I sniffed, and felt empty handed. The letter is gone!*
I had a clear vision, of her step-mother getting murdered by her step-father. She read my message! I felt kinda bad, but at least she knows the truth. What is this? Dan! He just adopted her, I am so glad!
"Mrs Carlie Xeon, madam, your boss requests you," I followed. Entered the court room, then all of doors were locked shut.
"Mrs Xeon, it's a shame to see you working at a high tensity. Now tell me what's wrong," my boss, Vince commented.
"I've been thinking, about my daughter." I noticed how Vince was dressed in his formal black uniform, as if he was about to go to a prom.
He had pale skin, golden eyes, and bronze hair. He had a passion for human blood, and always wanted to be a vampire in his human life. *He prefers to wear long sleeve *shirts and jeans with sneakers. "I see, do you want to meet her?"
"Yes! I mean yeah, but I can't see her," I sigh with sorrow.
"How come?" He asked in wonder as he straightened his tie.*
"Because I made a promise to my ex-boyfriend, Dan. To not let me near her until she is fifteen," I took a huge unneeded breath.
"Well we can wait until she is 15, or," he sighed with doubt.
"Or what?" I asked him with supense in my golden eyes.
"Or we can hunt Dan and kill him. After all, it's Roxanne you want the most," he carefully combed his hair.
"No!! I mean why? I love Dan too!"
"I was just giving a suggestion, Carlie," he yawn extremely enormously loud. "I'm thirsty, so I'm going to bail. See you next week?"
"Sure thing," I awaited for the doors to open, then walked out of the building. I feel like a criminal, robbing a famous bank, neglecting my soul. I want Roxanne back in my life.
That was chapter 1. Now the deal is that you think a suggestion for a title and I'll see which I like the best. Okay?
Thanks,
KumaRock11
I need your guys help for a story I'm currently making. I'll show what I'm talking about.
So far in my story I have reached half-way through chapter 2. Since I have finished chapter 1 I'll show it as my creation.
BEWARE: This chapter may be long for some people. I suggest if are under 13 you stop reading from here. But if are mature enough you're more than welcome to.
Chapter 1, Misty Darkness.
23 September 2025
Roxanne's POV:
Darkness surrounded me as I walked through the long hallway, I was just five. I was supposed to be napping, but I was thirsty, and I needed a glass of water.*
When I reached the kitchen door, screams occared, then a gun shot. Bang! A woman's bloody hand reached the hallway.
"Gross!" I jumped onto the ceiling, not wondering what just happened.
"Where are you Roxanne?" My father came to the hallway, with a knife in his right hand. Bloody and death-like.
My mother just got murdered by her father. Why would he do this? He eventually walked out of the house, cleaning himself to make sure nothing happened inside.
Then three men dressed in black suits and glasses walked in. I finally jumped onto the floor, stargazing at my dead mother.
"Mum, wake up, we've got visitors," I patted her mum's back. My mother didn't respond. "Mummy! Wake up! Please! Wake up!" I sobbed for ten minutes, and then noticed the blood on my hands. "Mummy's, dead?"
"Apparently so, we're so sorry for your loss," one of the men placed his hand on my shoulder. "I'm sorry to tell you this, but we must take you away now."
"Why?! I belong here!"
"You cannot live here on your own, child. We must take you with us," two of the men grabbed my arms.
"Wait! Can't I at least take my teddy with me?"
The men sighed, then made a decision. "You may take your teddy with you," they confirmed.
"Thank you," I ran to my bedroom to grab my teddy. It took at least ten minutes to find it. I looked everywhere for it, I gave up. Then suddenly I found a historical note, under my single bed. "Hmm?" I opened it, only to find a written message, and a golden jewel necklace. I was only five, however I was a tremendous reader for my age.
"Dear Roxanne,
Hi sweetie, if your reading this, your step-mother just recently died. Didn't she? Anyways I am not dead, so don't you worry. I'm just, busy. I need to tell you something, this may be depressing, but I'm a vampire. So are you, but you're half-human, that means you will grow until you're 18. I'll explain everything in ten years, okay?
Love you darling,
Your Real Mother Carlie."
Meanwhile:
"She's a strange one, isn't she?" Alex, one of the men questioned.
"Yes Alex, usually kids would love to be with us, because they have family issues," Carl answered, who is another one of the men.
"Roxanne's only five, and she doesn't have any family issues," Dan, the last man, explained clearly.
"How do you know that?" Carl and Alex asked.
**
"I know her real mother, we're good friends. Besides, I used to date her years ago. I also know her husband, I knew that guy was up to no good, I had never trusted that guy." Dan walked to my bedroom. "Roxanne? You in here?"He noticed the tears on my face.
"My mother, is, a," I collapsed on my bed. Falling into a deep sleep, wishing for my mum to be here, with me.
"Don't worry Roxanne, I'll be your new daddy, if that makes you feel better," Carl and Alex appeared in the room.
"What's taking you so long?" They questioned, peering over Dan's shoulder. "Is she okay?"
"It's okay, she's just stressed," Dan rose to his feet, turning around. "You know, I've been thinking that I should adopt her."
"Really? You sure you want to be a father?" Carl questioned Dan, certain if he is telling the truth.
"I'm sure, Carl, besides, she needs a real father. Who can protect her and take care of her," Dan picked up me and took me to their hover-car. "Roxanne, in ten years I'm going to tell you everything, just like your mother, okay?"
Alex and Carl walked to the van, closing the house door. With Dan placing me in the back seats.
"Dan, are you sure it's safe to adopt Roxanne, she's a." Alex paused, stepping into the drivers seat.
"We'll talk about it later okay?" Dan went in the back seats next to me. "Come on, we don't have all day."
Carl sat in the front passengers seat. Alex started driving, out of the town, out of the state, and out of the planet.
Space, it is so mysterious, there are thousands of galaxies, which planet are we going to? I am not certain, but I will find out. Eventually I will.
My mum was my hero, she is smart, gorgeous, and brave. She would calm me when things went wrong. She protects me, when trouble was ahead. We would bond, like any other mother-daughter.
Carlie's POV:
Blood-thristy, weak, and lonely. Just another vampire day for me. The reasons why I am blood-thirsty and weak are unimportant. I am lonely though because I miss my daughter, Roxanne.
I left her when she was two months old, she grew fast. She didn't know much though, so it was safe to. At first I felt happy, and free. But after a few months, I felt guilty and lost. I wanted her back in my life, but when I attempted to, her new parents threatened to kill me.
So now I am stuck waiting for her to read that message. I sniffed, and felt empty handed. The letter is gone!*
I had a clear vision, of her step-mother getting murdered by her step-father. She read my message! I felt kinda bad, but at least she knows the truth. What is this? Dan! He just adopted her, I am so glad!
"Mrs Carlie Xeon, madam, your boss requests you," I followed. Entered the court room, then all of doors were locked shut.
"Mrs Xeon, it's a shame to see you working at a high tensity. Now tell me what's wrong," my boss, Vince commented.
"I've been thinking, about my daughter." I noticed how Vince was dressed in his formal black uniform, as if he was about to go to a prom.
He had pale skin, golden eyes, and bronze hair. He had a passion for human blood, and always wanted to be a vampire in his human life. *He prefers to wear long sleeve *shirts and jeans with sneakers. "I see, do you want to meet her?"
"Yes! I mean yeah, but I can't see her," I sigh with sorrow.
"How come?" He asked in wonder as he straightened his tie.*
"Because I made a promise to my ex-boyfriend, Dan. To not let me near her until she is fifteen," I took a huge unneeded breath.
"Well we can wait until she is 15, or," he sighed with doubt.
"Or what?" I asked him with supense in my golden eyes.
"Or we can hunt Dan and kill him. After all, it's Roxanne you want the most," he carefully combed his hair.
"No!! I mean why? I love Dan too!"
"I was just giving a suggestion, Carlie," he yawn extremely enormously loud. "I'm thirsty, so I'm going to bail. See you next week?"
"Sure thing," I awaited for the doors to open, then walked out of the building. I feel like a criminal, robbing a famous bank, neglecting my soul. I want Roxanne back in my life.
That was chapter 1. Now the deal is that you think a suggestion for a title and I'll see which I like the best. Okay?
Thanks,
KumaRock11
