Thanatos ~ Volume One (My first attempt at writing a story!)

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If anyone is interested in reading a story I'm attempting to write, I have a prologue and a first chapter written up and put online if anyone's interested
It's a fantasy story set in a realistic world, focused on the life of a Grim Reaper. Keep in mind it's aimed at more of a teenage audience. Feedback is appreciated!

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/MarcusStockley/1925526/