^_^ Based on my comics, THE MINISH COMICS, I started to write a fan-fic that is much more mature, and cuts the jokes in half, puts my writing to the test, and organizes the timeline. I want to know what you think of them, so, tell me.
Chapter One
A extravagent young maiden was seen strolling unescorted through the large grassy field to the old smith's humble cottage by a rather curious raven. As the raven stared, it's cold, deathly eyes recognized an auric symbol. It had seen this symbol but once before, many moons ago, when a small hero had rescued him from a rock-spitting monster.
Meanwhile, in the Blacksmith's cottage, the old smith was showing that same hero how to temper a sword. Only now, this hero was a young man; he had grown a good foot since he had helped that raven. He wore a green tunic and hat which matched his wild, blonde hair and radiant blue eyes. On his back he carried a large sheild, and his new gauntlets bore but one-third of the golden symbol.
"Now, Link, slide the blade across here... hello?" The wise old smith was interrupted by a gentle tapping at the door, "Yes?"
What came through that door made Link's jaw drop in suprise and his heart skip a beat. In to the cottage gracefully stepped the beautiful princess of Hyrule, Zelda. It was three years since Link had last laid eyes on Zelda, she was on a royal visit to the neighboring kingdom.
"Link, it is so good to see you again!" Zelda exclaimed, "I don't think I missed the annual Picori Festival... I'd love it if you could..."
"Sure I'll come!" Link replied suddenly, "I mean... that sounds... okay."
As the two were walking towards the door, an ear-splitting sound was heard. It was a long, ghastly screech, like that of a raven's.
That's all of chapter one.
Chapter One
A extravagent young maiden was seen strolling unescorted through the large grassy field to the old smith's humble cottage by a rather curious raven. As the raven stared, it's cold, deathly eyes recognized an auric symbol. It had seen this symbol but once before, many moons ago, when a small hero had rescued him from a rock-spitting monster.
Meanwhile, in the Blacksmith's cottage, the old smith was showing that same hero how to temper a sword. Only now, this hero was a young man; he had grown a good foot since he had helped that raven. He wore a green tunic and hat which matched his wild, blonde hair and radiant blue eyes. On his back he carried a large sheild, and his new gauntlets bore but one-third of the golden symbol.
"Now, Link, slide the blade across here... hello?" The wise old smith was interrupted by a gentle tapping at the door, "Yes?"
What came through that door made Link's jaw drop in suprise and his heart skip a beat. In to the cottage gracefully stepped the beautiful princess of Hyrule, Zelda. It was three years since Link had last laid eyes on Zelda, she was on a royal visit to the neighboring kingdom.
"Link, it is so good to see you again!" Zelda exclaimed, "I don't think I missed the annual Picori Festival... I'd love it if you could..."
"Sure I'll come!" Link replied suddenly, "I mean... that sounds... okay."
As the two were walking towards the door, an ear-splitting sound was heard. It was a long, ghastly screech, like that of a raven's.
That's all of chapter one.
but other than that great job!
