Tom's Journey

[Trent the Paladin]

This one I'm going to do than the other I made.* Many of these will lead to other stories. Oh and many of my characters are not what they seem like.

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Tom's Journey
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Tom's Journey, Chapter 1

Tom, a boy at age 16, was enjoying his school year at Hogwarts."Geez, no one to fight, just peace and quite. It's so cool that Dubledore made me Librarian," Tom said. The library was ruined after a huge battle that had taken place last school year.*

"It's kinda my fault for ruining the library last year." "We then your need help," a voice said. It was Harry, Tom brother."Harry, I've never seen you come in the library before except to cheat and do illegal things.""So what?""Well the only time you see Harry and the word library is when the words is here to cheat is between them."

"Shut up Tom.""Well I can be trusted," Gabby said. "Yes you can be trusted." "Great, well then this place needs help."" I have new books and stuff, we just need to move everything out and move the new in."

So what do you think?Gabby I hope it was all right to use you in the story. You guys can delete the old Tom's Journey.Yes I was dead bored and I was looking for it.Another Theme

 

[Gabby]

That was good.You should make anouther chapter.And yes it was ok to use me in the stoy.

 

[Trent the Paladin]

Thanks, here's chapter 2:

Chapter 2

Later that evening, everyone was having dinner."Have you read thje news yet," Odd asked."No why?""Apperantly someone's been robbing place around here and killing people.""What?!?"

The TV soon cut in with late-breaking news."This just in! The robber has now been identied as Tom""What?!?!" Storm says," Arrest him!"

Tom running for his life, runs to Hyrule where he can hope for help from a friend.


Will he make it or not?Tom's not gonna take it!

 

[Gabby]

Short.


^_^


:huh:

 

[Trent the Paladin]

I had to go.

 

[Gabby]

oh.

 

[Trent the Paladin]

Chapter 3, Hope

Tom walking through the black market in a dark colored robes was looking for the one they now called Dark Mirage, or had once been know as Sora, a once evil rogue*, to help him hide.

Tom stepped into a black tent."May I help you?""Mirage, is that you?""Yes the legendary black marketer is I."Tom pulled the hood off."I need your help.""For what!?!, you had ruined my old career what now you want to ruin me again?""No, I've been famed and I need your help to hide me.""You'll have to pay me, to hide.""Of course I will."

Meanwhile a dark shadow move across Zelda's room."Yes?," Zelda said,"Who is it?""AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!*screams high pitched.


What happens next?Will Zelda die?Find out in chapter 4, The Darkness itself.The funny themeGuys so you know I'm really dead bored hey, what the heck.

 

[Trent the Paladin]

Chapter 4, Darkness Itself

Tom hearing the scream ran towards the castle, where he was being ambushed by guards. Fish the main guard yelled,"Surrender and you'll live!""Never!""Then so be it. Guards kill him!"

Tom jumped pulling out the Master Sword and Keyblade attacking.Guards were bruised, but not bad. Fish was left. Fish."How did you..."" Friends he said." Gabbylala and Mirage, followed by Harry come out from the forest.

Fish,"It still doesn't matter, you'll die soon enough and your pathetic friends too!"Gabby,"Tom go ahead, we'll tack care of Fish!""Got it!" Tom running in the castle made it to Zelda's room only to find her imprisioned in stone and a dark figure next to it.

Tom,"Who are you." Weird being,"You."


:blink: "What?!?""I'm Nega-Tom, sent to destory you and your world."Tom,"You'll never be able to!"Nega-Tom,"Oh really?"


What will happen next? Will they be arrested?

 

[UltraByte]

Hmm... Sounds a lot like 2009... <_< But the story's okay.

 

[Trent the Paladin]

Hmm... Sounds a lot like 2009... <_< But the story's okay.

It does? Oops. Well most stuff I think up. Ok here's Chapter 5:

Chapter 5, Fight Night!*Ding ding!*

Tom and Nega-Tom were fighting hard both evenly matched and weaking. Gabby and the others were wiped after defeating Fish.Gabby," We can't keep doing this." Harry," I know but we have to prove that Tom's inocent!"

Tom," Your pretty good, most Negas are either dumber or smarter than the good one." Nega-Tom,"Yes but I have been here alot under your nose, watching your every move, learning what you learned."

Tom and Nega battled out and Nega losing.Nega,"How did you beat me?" Tom," Inner strength and training." Nega," Well you think that's the last of me, no you think again. Remember when you were turned into a Heartless?So was I, giving us both Nobodies."

Tom,"It doesn't matter your dead here and now!"Nega,"Later!" Nega faded into a black hole disapering.Tom,"Grr. He got away. Hey the sercuity cam here will prove I'm inocent!"

Tom grabbed the tape and gave it to Harry to download it.Harry,"Hmmm, well this tape is ok but it's not wanting to work. Maybe if I turned on the quantuim enhacer and the DVD/VCR it just might work."Odd,"In english genuis." Harry,"In other words it should work."Tom,"Good."

Tom took it to the King who watched it.King ]

 

[Gabby]

nice

 

[Trent the Paladin]

Ok here's Chapter 6-7:

Chapter 6, A New World

Nega Tom wiped was looking for a way to get out of here. He knew Tom would soon be looking for him. He opened a portal without knowing."Wha," Nega said surprized. He looked in. It was leading him to a place called TBT.

"Perfect, I'll find out to take over TBT and deal with Tom and his Merry Band of Misfits." Nega stepped in and saw it was in a poor state."The perfect time to take over indeed." "Hello there," Darth Gothan said," what's your name?" "My name? It's uhh..(Crap, I should of known someoone would ask that) It's Xemmas.""Hmm, well Xemmas we you can help us finish rebuilding TBT and find some missing people."

"You and what army?"" What," Gothan said surprised,"Oh no!" Xemmas sent a big ball of darkness at Gothan knocking him unconsious." The less the better," Xemmas said," and I like this new name, it suits me well."

Meanwhile back at Hogwarts, Tom and the other were busy getting ready the Library and a Cafe with it so everyone could have more book choices."Well we're done!," Tom said joyfully."Ugh, finally," Gabby said. A familiar ringtone started."Ugh, it's nearly Christmas and the Center is calling us," Harry said," Why can't they sends someone else?""Because of what had happened last year, when there was a spy in the Center and many members were found and elimnated by the spy who got away so only Team Avatar remains along with Team Mystery."

Tom and the others went and saw that the Center was once more lively again and that other Teams were called."Hey Martin," Tom said."Tom, is that you?"Martin said."In the flesh!""You were called too?""Yes sadly."

Well I hope Chapter 6 was good here's 7:

Chapter 7, TBT?

After a few minutes Tom and them were up and King Mickey was telling them their orders."Team Avatar, we have a huge chrsis on our hands.A new world has been discovered and we got a distress signal from it.It appears that Nega Tom is their with a new name*pauses and looks back at message*Xemmas. I want you all to find him and stop him. His plans are uncertian but one thing is for sure; he wants trouble."

"Well in that case we'd better hurry," Tom said," so Billy will get everything we need ready?"

I'll add more soon.

 

[UltraByte]

It seems you're trying to fit too much into this story. Hogwarts, TBT, Kindgom Hearts, LoZ... @_@ Also, work on your grammar.

 

[Trent the Paladin]

I know but I fused them lol. And I try to make it the best I can or to atleast make it to where you can sound it out.

 

[UltraByte]

Yeah, but that's still too much, in my taste.

Well, it's confusing to read sometimes.

 

[Trent the Paladin]

Yeah, but that's still too much, in my taste.

Well, it's confusing to read sometimes.

Ok I see your point. <_<

 

[UltraByte]

Don't go changing your FF to it's entirety, cause that would be uncool. Instead, try just weeding out some bad grammar.

 

[Trent the Paladin]

I plan on, but not now.

 

[Gabby]

cool chapters.

 

[Trent the Paladin]

Thanks Gab. Here's Chapter 7I'm finishing up chapter 7)

Continued from a few posts ago:

"Yes Billy has your stuff already. So go now and stop Xemmas!', Mickey said.

"So," Tom thought while being transported there,"The Bell Tree is in a state of dismissive and many things are dying.This may be a tough mission, or it may not." "According to the data it's February there," Harry said but Tom wasn't listening, but instead something was odd about Odd. He acted funny when Billy mentioned TBT.

"Just what are you hiding Odd," Tom said quietly to himself," and TBT has something to do with it."" Hey are you ok," Gabby asked," you've been awfully quite so far.""Huh, oh um I'm ok." " Here we are," Billy said cheerfully. Tom and them were standing on a cliff over looking TBT.

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