Traumatized

[coffeebean!]

It always starts with something small
Something insignificant
But then it turns into something serious
Something tedious

It never ends
But you promised

 

[Mimsie]

OMG thats so awsome!
How long did that take you to write?
Something like that would take me about 5 weeks to write o_o

 

[ipodawesum]

woah.deep.awesome.
well the poem, not the meaning behind it.

 

[coffeebean!]

OMG thats so awsome!
How long did that take you to write?
Something like that would take me about 5 weeks to write o_o

I just finished it.
Took me about 10 minutes because I was flipping from TBT to my poem.

It's pretty easy to write when you're feeling it.

 

[Nightray]

Awesome xP

 

[Hub12]

Nice....

 

[Draco Roar]

Excellent Work!

 

[coffeebean!]

Excellent Work!

Thank you very much

 

[laneybaney921]

so kool

 

[solarshadow]

Nice, very.. poetic!

 

[Muh Pit]

Very nice ma.



It better not be about me...

 

[coffeebean!]

Very nice ma.



It better not be about me...

You wish. =p

 

[Muh Pit]

Very nice ma.



It better not be about me...

You wish. =p

I just wouldn't want to cause you no pain. ;P



But then again, its nice to have a poem dedicated to you...


HINT HINT. <

 

[coffeebean!]

Very nice ma.



It better not be about me...

You wish. =p

I just wouldn't want to cause you no pain. ;P



But then again, its nice to have a poem dedicated to you...


HINT HINT. <

But if I wrote a poem of how great you are it would suck!
Remember, you have to mean what you write >

 

[.::PurpleLife::.]

makes me feel like an emo 0.e
lol
Great job

 

[Muh Pit]

Very nice ma.



It better not be about me...

You wish. =p

I just wouldn't want to cause you no pain. ;P



But then again, its nice to have a poem dedicated to you...


HINT HINT. <

But if I wrote a poem of how great you are it would suck!
Remember, you have to mean what you write >

:'(
:huh:
:huh:

 

[MitchHanson]

It was alright for someone new at poems. It read too much like a story. And the first phrase instantly makes the reader know that it was written by a girl. Yeah, you can tell it's written by a girl, it's hard to explain, but something you want to avoid.

7/10

 

[chubsterr]

very very emo..

 

[coffeebean!]

It was alright for someone new at poems. It read too much like a story. And the first phrase instantly makes the reader know that it was written by a girl. Yeah, you can tell it's written by a girl, it's hard to explain, but something you want to avoid.

7/10

Sexist much?
I'm not new to poetry, and it's meant to be that way.

 

[chubsterr]

It was alright for someone new at poems. It read too much like a story. And the first phrase instantly makes the reader know that it was written by a girl. Yeah, you can tell it's written by a girl, it's hard to explain, but something you want to avoid.

7/10

u sound like a pro