coffeebean!
Senior Member
I wrote two poems today in my spare time during class.
So read them, comment, and discuss? =P
First one:
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you see them struggle
you see them suffer
live their lives in pain
knowing they are not safe
no hopes
no dreams
no faith
you do nothing but ignore it
hide the fact it's true
pretend it's not there
not a single care
you know this is not rare
you have the power to help them
yet you do nothing
if it were you
or your family
or a friend
if this were the case,
you sure wouldn't pretend
so why not now?
no cares for the others
who live their lives with their eyes closed
while you live long and prosper
you are the hideous monster</div>
second:
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I look up at the sky
and see
no stars tonight
I look up at the sky
and see
no clouds today
I look up at your face
and see
no smile?
I listen from my window
and hear
no chirps tonight
I listen from my room
and hear
no cries for once
I listen for your words
and hear
nothing?
nothing....
Nothing
I open my eyes and see nothing
I listen closely and hear nothing
In this world of sound and sight
we are all deaf
we are all blind</div>
I know this last one is a bit confusing but it has to do with 'seeing the path but not seeing what's in it' if you know what I mean. ^-^
So read them, comment, and discuss? =P
First one:
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you see them struggle
you see them suffer
live their lives in pain
knowing they are not safe
no hopes
no dreams
no faith
you do nothing but ignore it
hide the fact it's true
pretend it's not there
not a single care
you know this is not rare
you have the power to help them
yet you do nothing
if it were you
or your family
or a friend
if this were the case,
you sure wouldn't pretend
so why not now?
no cares for the others
who live their lives with their eyes closed
while you live long and prosper
you are the hideous monster</div>
second:
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I look up at the sky
and see
no stars tonight
I look up at the sky
and see
no clouds today
I look up at your face
and see
no smile?
I listen from my window
and hear
no chirps tonight
I listen from my room
and hear
no cries for once
I listen for your words
and hear
nothing?
nothing....
Nothing
I open my eyes and see nothing
I listen closely and hear nothing
In this world of sound and sight
we are all deaf
we are all blind</div>
I know this last one is a bit confusing but it has to do with 'seeing the path but not seeing what's in it' if you know what I mean. ^-^
