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(◡‿◡✿)Visiting dream addresses! Doing free reviews~ (◡‿◡✿) [OFFLINE]

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I'll be visiting dream addresses tonight! Trying to get the dream address visitor badge. ^~^
Feel free to visit mine too!
I'll give a review on your town and post it on your wall x

I'll try to get as much done as I can ^_^

I'll be giving you:
~The positives
~The negatives
~How to improve (in my opinions.)

Comment your dream address please ! Thank you~
 
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you can check mine
My Dream code : 4800-2253-7299, thanks

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this is a friend code : it is a ZEN town :) enjoy
he is looking for review too so thank you very much for him
Girls clothes are on the left, guys on the right. Also just know now silvers house is pure storage so its just sets :p
Nathan from Saphire - DC: 5700-2329-8356
 
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you can check mine
My Dream code : 4800-2253-7299, thanks

- - - Post Merge - - -

this is a friend code : it is a ZEN town :) enjoy
he is looking for review too so thank you very much for him
Girls clothes are on the left, guys on the right. Also just know now silvers house is pure storage so its just sets :p
Nathan from Saphire - DC: 5700-2329-8356

~Review~

Positives: I really like the path ways used! really unique and it contrasts with the bamboo shoots. :3 I love the zen streelight! the placement of them are perfect. The red bench is really unique too! haven't seen that in other dream towns yet! I like your zen theme! I like your asian secondary character , really fits the theme :3 I also love the bridge ;-; oh my gosh, I love your pwps! they're so cool~ and the placements of the pwps are really good too! I really like your town theme and your pwps! Your villager housing placement is pretty great too! How the 4 houses are surrounding your main house is really unique ^_^ Really enjoyed visiting your town~

Negatives: Some of the tree placements are abit too crowded~ There are a lot of blank spots around your town, but since your town is still incomplete, I won't give too much judgement!~

How to improve: Try adding more hybrids to the blank spots. I suggest using more black roses or black hybrids as I feel it will fit your town more! but feel free to use any other hybrids to feel up the spots! Try toning down on tree placements, on the area sll the way down on the right of your town (where the outdoor bath is), I feel the trees are too crowded there. Try chopping down 1-2 trees so you can see the path more!

I really enjoyed your town. Amazing town! I'll love to see it when it's complete! I'm sorry if my reviews aren't that good, actually my first time doing reviews ;-; gahh!
 
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Could you visit mine? It's a work in progress still but I think it's starting to come together. There might be a couple spots where the path tile has been picked up so just ignore those please. ^^;

4200-3388-8887
 
You can visit mine too if you like :) code is in my signature ^-^

~Review~

Postives: Your town name is so cute! Meruperi is an anime/manga correct? the name is so cute! gahh! >< Anyways, I am in LOVE with your town. Entering your town, the sakura leaves for blowing and it was so pleasant! I love your town, is the setting spring? the flowery grass sign is perfection! the path is so pink and lovely! I loved the presents you placed! I loved the fizzy apple juice! You have Marshal in your town! oh my gosh! :3 I love your hybrid placements, the pink and purple fits so well in your town theme! the scarecrow and the wheat/farm design you put around the scarecrow was just so awesome hgruiefjk I love the tree placements >< where you placed your hammock and benches was really nice! I love how the bamboo surrounds the outdoor bath! just basically fell in love with your town ><

Negatives: Honestly can't think of any. Your town is great the way it is right now! well done! x

How to improve: I have no idea. Your town as fair as I know it, doesn't really need much improvement at all!

Very pleasant town! thank you! it's so cute :) Loved visiting it~
 
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~Review~

Postives: How you set your path out at the plaza was really cool!~ Your town is quite incomplete so I can't really fully review it. D:

Negatives: The flowers could be fixed up a bit, some were placed everywhere D: and there were lots of blank spots in your town. The tree placements were everywhere, but your town is not complete yet so I can't judge much!

How to improve: Place more flowers/hybrids in the spaces! Add more trees to the blank spaces too, align them or put them in a more neat placement or in a placement you will like~ Your paths were not complete so I'm not sure what else to say~

I look forward to seeing your towns completion! thank you~
 
Could you visit mine? It's a work in progress still but I think it's starting to come together. There might be a couple spots where the path tile has been picked up so just ignore those please. ^^;

4200-3388-8887

~Review~

Postives: I like the water design at the plaza! and the path design c: Looks really good! The heart design with the fountain in the middle was so pretty! the water design around the roost looked awesome~ I like the stair-like path design through your town! felt like I was walking on 3D stairs! Your flower placements are gorgeous c: the heart flower placements are so cute! gah! and I like how you placed a flower in between the bushes! ~

Negatives
: Although your town's flower placements are lovely, I feel there are some blank places that needs some more flowers!~

How to improve: Add some more flowers/hybrids to the blank areas in your town! More pwps too, and a few bushes! I think if you added more pwps, it would look amazing!

I love your flower placements! Really unique and gorgeous! I might have to message you sometime if I ever need my flowers arranged! enjoyed your town! thank you, and sorry if my review was really bad. D:
 
Thank you so much for the review <3 I'm glade you liked it!

It's april in my game. The trees turning pink in the first 10 days of april ^-^
And you are correct Merupuri is a really sweet manga <3

Thanks again for the review! :)
 
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