Yui's art dump <3 CRITIQUE APPRECIATED
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Mega_Cabbage
Meh
What are you having trouble with when making the eyes? It's kind of hard to fix something when we don't have a reference point.could someone help me with the eyes ahhg
haha its only been 10 days but thank you soo much! I made a new DA that I have posted the finished version on because I lways get upset when I improve and my old art is on there q v q
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err I needed help with the whole thing, as I needed someone to like, redline eyes on it as a reference but I just used gross eyes because I was too lazy to keep trying
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the quality is bad because when using the tbt uploader, it turns JPG :/
Why not put it all on one DA so people can see how much you've improved and how passionate you are about improving? Seriously, it might only be 10 days but dang you've accomplished a lot in those 10 days. What do you use, btw? Tablet and SAI or...?
(pssst let me commission you.)
Idkidk I usually get like 2 watchers so xD maybe if I stay on this one and be more interactive, people will notice me haha
and thanks so much!!
I use a broken tablet (( still works slightly )) and firealapca!
Please do, I'm rbroke on tbt and points, just pm the ref and what you'd like to pay with uvu
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Finnian
100% Bad luck always.
Finnian
100% Bad luck always.
I'm so not though. Omg. I love your art though, seriously.
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BUT WHY ARE YOU UP? AREN'T YOU 12???
- The chest area is too big for her and makes her body proportion unbalanced.
- Draw the body the face is facing. Or, add more details on the neck so the character looks like she's turning her face to the direction that caught her attention!
- I wasn't sure if it was meant to be a bun or a ponytail so I did both (it looks really out of place orz)
- Use darker colours/shades when shading your character. Normally I would avoid using both cell-shading and soft-shading together unless you have grasped shading quite well to execute it.
- Practice drawing folds/creases on clothes!
- Never again will I draw huge eyes on a character
- I was lazy with the arms sorry
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I'm really awful at explaining but I hope that would help you in some ways? Good luck!
- The chest area is too big for her and makes her body proportion unbalanced.
- Draw the body the face is facing. Or, add more details on the neck so the character looks like she's turning her face to the direction that caught her attention!
- I wasn't sure if it was meant to be a bun or a ponytail so I did both (it looks really out of place orz)
- Use darker colours/shades when shading your character. Normally I would avoid using both cell-shading and soft-shading together unless you have grasped shading quite well to execute it.
- Practice drawing folds/creases on clothes!
- Never again will I draw huge eyes on a character
- I was lazy with the arms sorry
you did the hair correct, it was suppose to be both, as a bun with hair fallling out of it
TeruTeruBozu
Senior Member
Th-That's a lot to redline ;; I'll try to see if I can redline the last one since the perspective is a bit more complicated, but what really helps is breaking the body down into simple shapes; you can look online for a multitude of tutorials on how to do this 
Th-That's a lot to redline ;; I'll try to see if I can redline the last one since the perspective is a bit more complicated, but what really helps is breaking the body down into simple shapes; you can look online for a multitude of tutorials on how to do this
well, i reallyy just needed the 1st, 3rd, and last redlined so its jut three ; vv ;;
