Thank you for your visit and advice. I agree with you about needing more character development, I have actually been told that before, I guess I'm kind of struggling. I'll try to scatter more item around town to help, again, thank you!
IT'S DONE! I'm finally going public with the DA:3 5C00 - 0026 - 5354, hope you like it. I accidentally emptied my whole inbox but I remembered what you told me, thank you so much for that initial review n.n