YEAHHH!!! YOU DID!~ XD Only thing is, that the whole funds should go towards the donation pools. Also add this to the end of "Here, We will be Selling Extra Collectibles that we have found, " or that you have donated to Team Popsicle!
Also erase this line!~ "If you have donated funds to the Donation Pool, we will sell you the collectible for cheaper!" Instead add this "And if there's any donations in the donation pool, you will get the popsicle collectible for a lot cheaper depending on how much is in the donation pool!"
Also add in a rule that if they want to join the raffle they can ONLY join if they genuinely want the popsicle and wants to join Team Popsicle and that this is not a raffle for someone who wants to resell the popsicle. c: I would hate to see someone sell off the popsicle for profit when there's others who actually want it xD (I mean unless they are giving it off to a friend who wants it, then that's fine, just no selling it for profit. )